The Balcony Bows

The balcony bows like a bridge unmaintained.
Song birds are silent, their hearts uninspired.
Grape vines hunker down as if never trained.
Scarlet petals fall, their fragrance expired.

Shattered is the night sky like sharp glass shards.
Sparks, once in our eyes, liquify the ground.
Minstrels are mute in abandoned courtyards.
Pitter-patter is the refraining sound.

Masquerade faces can no longer hide
from the truth that beauty departs with death.
A dagger divides a young groom and bride;
lamenting cries consume their final breath.

The script is flipped over like clover in mud.
Misconstrued love poisons life-giving blood.


8-15-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 10/15/2022 5:54:00 AM
Creative work about love/romance going bad. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2022 2:34:00 AM
An excellent sonnet... Rhymes and flows so well... the ending is dark and sad...
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Date: 8/19/2022 10:57:00 AM
Powerful words of poignant effectiveness Juliet! I immediately thought of Romeo and Juliet - "misconstrued love poisons life-giving blood." This is so skillfully written with wonderful imagery clues sprinkled through out. So happy to see you back "in the soup!" Blessings!
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Date: 8/19/2022 8:30:00 AM
I didn't get the Romeo and Juliet reference until the third stanza, but beautiful lament on the fate of the young lovers~
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