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The Bag Lady

She humbles herself With her lack of ambition A stain of sadness In all that she wears She mumbles through life With words of conviction banished from gladness by guilt that she bears She crumbles inside From a need for contrition A martyr for madness she sits and she stares

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/14/2009 5:20:00 PM
Wow. Awesome write. Incredible word choice and rhyme and flow. Powerful emotion this evokes. Nice to meet you and thank you so much for that wonderful comment on my poem! Off the site for a while, hoping to return soon. Warmest wishes, Shar xoxo
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