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The Bachelor Bunny

He was a charmer,this bachelor bunny. The girls thought he was hilariously funny. He'd go hopping into their briar patch. Quite a few succulent carrots he'd snatch. But the girl bunnies,they didn't seem to mind. In the rabbity world he was quite a find! One day he showed up in the valley. He was hungry so he didn't dilly-dally. Then one little lady took him something sweet. She acted demure,despite those big feet. Now the other girl bunnies were mad and jealous. Cos' in her pursuit she was really quite zealous! She'd decided this lop-eared boy would be hers. He was just the type bunny the lady prefers. But he indeed had another plan. He grabbed her carrots and off he ran. A confirmed bachelor bunny he would stay. But he would be back another day. for Carol Brown's contest"Bunny Rabbits"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2012 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on your bunny win, Deb! Rhonda :)
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:24:00 PM
DEB... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 3:55:00 PM
Deb, wonderful story and to do it in form of couplets, that is impressive. Well done. Congrats on making Carol's winners' list............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this bunny tale xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:16:00 PM
deb, enjoyed the story of this bachelor bunny.. applause to you for the fine win! :) huggs
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:07:00 AM
congrats Deb on a fantastic win for this wonderful write and bunny tale luv..
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:16:00 AM
LOL... Congratulations on the win. An enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:51:00 PM
What lady can resist a charming bunny? Really cute entry for the contest. A winner for sure. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2012 8:35:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Bunny Rabbit contest Deb. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:34:00 PM
All male rabbits are confirmed bachelors. They are some of the most promiscuous creatures living on the earth. Your poem was a nice read.
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:03:00 PM
very very cute, Deb. I think Carol will love it.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:11:00 PM
Cure write. I think I have known a couple of human male bunnies like that one in your poem, LOL! Melody
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:21:00 PM
Smiles and joy and yes FUN... love your way.... hugs Michael
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:13:00 PM
Good fun, good write enjoyed it a lot well done xx
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:59:00 PM
Gotta watch out for those kind, right> Fun story for the contest. Carol is gonna love judging this one. Good luck. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:21:00 PM
This is so cute, Deb. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:20:00 PM
Cute. Not too bachelors in the bunny-world, I would suppose. This was a fun read, good luck in the contest.
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