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The Babbling Brook

babbling brook flows -
                                         gently down the outcrop stream -
                                                    musical journey

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Carrie Richards

August 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM

Lovely images in this gentle haiku! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! ~ Carrie

August 15, 2008 at 2:37 PM

Lovely imagery in this poem Kathy! Congratulations on being chosen as one of the haiku contest winners. Way to go! Wishing you continued success with your writing my friend. Karen

Brian Strand

July 19, 2008 at 9:03 AM

Katherin,this one would meet the meet the criteria better.Perhaps 'flows is superfluous in L1 ?.Rgds Brian & thanks for your interest in my contest & fo your welcome comments on my postings

Joseph Spence Sr

June 12, 2008 at 6:38 AM

This is so wonderful. One is able to hear the music from the brook with focused attention. Great job! ~ Joseph

Marycile Beer

June 10, 2008 at 7:10 PM

You are so right on this one Katherine. When they let the water out of the dams there is a lot of water. They had a bad rain on the mountain and it was flooding last weekend. I love a little brook, God Bless, Cile

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