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I come from Valdosta, Georgia, the lovely peach state, Where everyone uses a southern drawl to communicate. Valdosta is known as the “Azalea City” for its gorgeous flowers. In the spring this splendid sight has a captivating power. I’m afraid the azaleas are forgotten by the summer, When it gets so hot we are running for cover. When we have a storm, I pray the electricity doesn’t go out. In Valdosta, having the ac cranked is what it’s all about! I grew up the daughter of a Pentecostal minister. There are four siblings, including Barbara, my twin sister. We went to church faithfully three times a week, Sitting on the pew trying not to make a peep. We may have grumbled about getting so much religion, But down the road it has helped us all make decisions. My Dad has now gone for his reward in Heaven. I wish I could hear one more of his sermons God-given. In high school my twin and I were members of a championship band. We won so many contests, the Marching Cats was the best in the land. The famous band director in Valdosta was the amazing Frank Butenschon. His talent and dedication made us all winners, and we shined! My best band competition memory was as good as it gets. We won, and performed a half-time show for the Miami Dolphins and Jets. The other piccolos and I marched out for a solo in front of the crowd. That’s when they cut to commercial at home for my parents so proud! To move along, fresh out of college I married a man 15 years older. I was naïve and mesmerized, he was so much bolder. We moved to Houston, where I taught high school. Life was exciting, and being a newlywed was so cool. Several years later we moved to New Hampshire, his home state. The mountains, the snow, and especially the summers were great. We opened a business that lasted for 25 years. I was company President while we were entrepreneurs. In NH for 20 years I was a member of the Upper Valley Community Band, Playing my flute and piccolo for parades and summer concerts so grand. We also played at Faneuil Hall, Germany, Austria, and France on tour. Carole Blake, the renowned band director, put us on the map for sure! After thirty years being man and wife, our marriage hit the rocks. I moved back to Valdosta, where my family is mere blocks. In my hometown, what others think of me does not keep me up at night. I’m enjoying my freedom, and God has me in His sights. 6/20/17

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Date: 6/22/2017 8:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your story, Brenda, congratulations on POTD.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Eve. It was a wonderful day for me being so honored!
Date: 6/22/2017 4:04:00 PM
Loved reading this :) I also am a twin
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Phoenix. Yes, the bond between twins cannot be matched!
Date: 6/22/2017 3:18:00 PM
Very forthright and flowing poem, Brenda. It moved w/honest emotion and grace. Kudos for POTD. May love light your path always.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Freddie for your kind words! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 3:16:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your wonderful bio Brenda. I have a twin sister too and she lived in Atlanta Georgia for many years. I used to visit her, usually in spring and fall, the two prettiest times of the year I think. Your bio was exciting to read and wonderfully composed. Big congratulations on POTD honor. It does make your day doesn't it. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie : )
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Connie! Yes, it has made my day! You are right, the spring and fall are great times of the year here. After the summer heat, I am happy to see fall get here!
Date: 6/22/2017 3:03:00 PM
Wonderful story...Congrats on POTD
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 3:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Brenda on your fabulous poem of the day :)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Akkina. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 6/22/2017 12:04:00 PM
This is absolutely delightful Brenda! Congratulations on potd and best of luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 9:38:00 AM
Near to my heart, Brenda. My maternal grandmother all the way back to England were Georgians. I've been through Georgia but not to stay.
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 11:23:00 AM
Georgia is a wonderful state, but it sure gets hot here in the summers! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 8:56:00 AM
Don't tell me you live on Peachtree St. Everyone I know from Georgia lives on Peachtree, no matter the city. Congratulations for POTD honors Brenda, well done...
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Charlie! No, I don't lie on Peachtree, but there is a Peachtree Street here in Valdosta. :)
Date: 6/22/2017 8:41:00 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD!!! my poet friend...a great bio Brenda...home sweet home...god bless...^WW^
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior! I am on cloud nine this morning! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 8:24:00 AM
Back to say,Congratulations Brenda on POTD. Hey Brenda, you deserve it! You write some very good poems. I am glad you were chosen today:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/22/2017 10:37:00 AM
It is indeed an honor and it never gets old. I am happy for you, Brenda. I am smiling for you and with you:):)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Daniel! It is so exciting being chosen for POTD. You know the feeling! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 4:30:00 AM
- Nice to read about your life, Brenda :) - Lovely written :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile. I am smiling from ear to ear this morning. :)
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2017 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth. That is so exciting I got POTD! The memory of playing in that half-time show will be with me forever!
Date: 6/22/2017 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. What a fine picture you paint.....fancy your big moment and the TV goes to commercial!
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:53:00 AM
One thing I forgot to include in the poem was that I was raised Pentecostal, but I married a Catholic. He had to undergo intense scrutiny by my family to win their approval.
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Date: 6/20/2017 10:06:00 AM
Nice to meet you Brenda. Lol A most interesting bio... It's sorta funny how people always seem to drift back home. You guys grow a lot of watermelons down there too, don't you?
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/20/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Daniel. I moved back home to be near family, especially my Mother. Yes we do grow a lot of watermelons here. I bought a huge one yesterday. I don't know who I thought was going to carry it inside for me. Must have been a blonde moment. I made it, but my back paid the price!
Date: 6/20/2017 8:12:00 AM
This is so lovely! I have to save! Good luck in the contest!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/20/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 6/20/2017 7:36:00 AM
what a wonderful bio poem Brenda - and the prettiest flower in that picture is YOU:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/20/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Jan for the kind words! Makes my day! :)

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