The Awesome Merry Month

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Abracadabra Rhyme
Created by William Kekaula. The syllable count is your choice but must be the same for all eleven lines. abRacadabRa is the rhyme scheme, and the lines with the R's are reversed lines. All lines must be rhyming with the exception of lines 'c', and, 'd'..

How awesome is the month of May. They say it’s merry. That’s SO true. Of springtime’s months, it is the best. Rare it is to see clouds of grey. Newborn lambs and cute colts frolic. I want to play in that same way! The season’s in full fruition - not too hot like on a June day. The grass is green and skies are blue. It is the best of springtime’s months. Outside I go with no delay! May 12, 2021

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 6/4/2021 6:54:00 AM

This is definitely charming, Andrea, and so well-crafted. Congratulations on your fine win! Carol Louise

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/2/2021 4:09:00 PM

Congratulation on your top contest win. You deserve it with a charming penned poem, blessings, and regards

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2021 5:34:00 AM

A lovely poem on May, normally my favorite month as it is dedicated to Our Lady in Malta. Unfortunately with all the corruption we have I cannot enjoy the countryside with buildings going up all the time. Hugs

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/13/2021 10:54:00 AM

What beautiful description of spring... Here we are suffering hot summer and waiting for summer rains at times to give some respite...Also, here in my parents place..right now..I have network issues ...I wish to read more poems and give more comments... .. Have a great day dear sweet friend.. ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/13/2021 9:45:00 AM

The joy of a marvelous month is crowded into these beautiful, imagery rich lines. Best wishes for the contest.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/13/2021 7:10:00 AM

This is a happy poem, Andrea. Makes the reader feel refreshed and good. I always liked it as a kid because that was when school let out for summer:) Hey, I'm eating a banana for breakfast. yumm

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2021 5:16:00 AM

Much joy in your words, Andrea. A beautiful ode to May!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2021 4:57:00 AM

Fantastic write, Andrea; a real vision came to fruition with acceptance of joy and celebration of beauty... This should be placed high, with my best wishes of luck Best regards, my friend

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/13/2021 4:36:00 AM

Lovely verse. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Sweet Friend. Love, Gina