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The Awe of White Flowers

Regardless of kingdom, class or division, Whether labelled exotic, tropical or wild, All white flowers are favored by my vision As pure perfection, peaceful and undefiled. White blooms whisper a symphony crescendo, Dancing and thrilling my inner light with awe. Ivory buds melt stress snarls to a mellow, Spiritually enhancing, soul deep thaw. My inner spark glows fresh, pristine elation Beholding white petals thick, crisp purity. Vivid white softens life with calm creation Of unsullied, ideal clustered surety. White flowers grow innocent serenity Displays with chaste, passionate, pacifist ways To gift bouquets of velvet tranquility And genuine, snow-calm softness to my days. ... CayCay Jennings August 9, 2016

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Date: 8/17/2016 9:10:00 AM
A dance through the garden of metaphor, beautifully done CayCay. congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:09:00 PM
CayCay! Congrats on your awesome placement with this beautiful poem lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2016 8:40:00 AM
Hi CayCay. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:00:00 AM
great write .....Seren
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Date: 8/14/2016 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, CayCay! :-) P.S. While white flowers represent purity and innocence, they can be deadly, too -- as in the case of the Mountain Laurel, the Hemlocks and Giant Hogweeds (poisonous and invasive)....
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:53:00 AM
wowowow, WAY TO GO!!! Loved it, Caycay
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:29:00 PM
I am so happy to see this beauty a top winner CayCay. You deserve it! White flowers do impress, especially white roses. This poem is very impressive! Congratulations on your awesome win! 7 ; ) I think I faved this one.
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:25:00 PM
You are definitely shining bright with your poetry, you are on a winning roll! Congrats on your great second place win!
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:11:00 PM
CayCay, wonderfully written congratulations on your 2nd place win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/13/2016 8:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2016 8:31:00 PM
Hi CayCay, It's so good to see that you placed so well. Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:43:00 PM
You have set a tranquil mood for me CayCay, and written a lovely poem.
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Date: 8/11/2016 9:16:00 PM
This poem expresses that inner light you possess CayCay. It is a lovely poem and I hope it does really well in the contest. : ) 7
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:58:00 AM
Such beautiful soothing imagery CayCay a delightful take on the flower theme - will have to 'listen' to my lilies when I smell their alluring scent:-) I have one white flowered orchid in my lounge which is in bloom at the moment :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2016 9:14:00 PM
This brings me to sigh with such satisfaction.....the beauty is so lovely, CayCay! (I love the pure white of any sweet flower the best !!)
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Date: 8/9/2016 7:25:00 PM
I agree with John, Caycay. Such a tranquil and soothing write. I think you are an excellent writer, too!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/9/2016 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel - your comments mean a great deal to me. All the best ... CayCay smiling
Date: 8/9/2016 5:00:00 PM
Very, very soothing...And soft like a snowy white pillow. A pillow I could just lie back upon...close my eyes...rest me weary head...And fall peacefully and happily into the deepest sleep - where to dream contently of fantastic, unsullied, purest, snow-white flowers! Soon, johnny lad, you will sleep long and safe soon - And wander the marvelous and tranquil poetic fields of CayCays magificent blooms!! My very best regards, CayCay. And my warmest and most sincere wishes to you as always. :) john
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/9/2016 5:04:00 PM
I love your poetic and unique response, it is beautiful and touching, John. Thank you ... CayCay

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