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The Awakening

THE AWAKENING It was midnight that I laid still and breath had filtered down An open book - a nagging fly will wait for me until bestirred at morning’s knock when stoves excite a brew and housewives stir a door toward sunrise bursting through - to heaven like a broom sweeping eyelids like a fan and chattel and dust balls like billiards across the room - that wake the inner chambers of my brain i separate stalls that conjure up my daily tasks within these slumbered walls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2015 9:39:00 PM
BURT :) Congratulations!! <3 you are one of the poetry soups Top and Hottest Poet, -this month. I hope you enjoyed Your Easter Weekend PLUS, Your name on the featured page of the ~Best New Poet~ Enjoy the coming week. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:29:00 PM
Lovely images in a poem which is always one step ahead of you. Enjoyed this Burt.
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