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The Avon Lady

Having another crisis, and feeling overwhelmed, Kim stared at the bottle, with all the pills, feeling depressed and dismayed, she felt she couldn't live another day… Reaching for the bottle, screwing off the lid, she held her palm out to catch a bunch of pills, Sitting with them in her hand on the couch, she thought, "this is it," and was about to put them in her mouth, when all of sudden, her door bell rang, and putting the pills aside, she temporarily postponed her suicide... Opening up her door, stood an Avon lady, saying to Kim, "Hi hon, can I come in?" Kim said "I guess so," with a weak grin, Their conversation quickly turned from make-up to Jesus, Kim explaining to her, that her life was such a mess, the avon lady said she also did Bible studies too, and before she left she gave Kim a new Bible, her cell number, and a scripture or 2, Kim looked up the scriptures and then she read Jeremiah 1:5, saying that God knew her before she was formed in the womb, and then Matthew 11:28, saying that if you pray to God, that He will give you rest… after reading those 2 scriptures, she felt more at peace, thinking maybe this was all just a test... thanking God for that Avon ladies advice, and for making her think twice about taking her life. Hebrews 13:2 This poem is dedicated to anyone who is thinking of suicide and my older sister Patti who lost her son Joey 16 years ago to suicide.

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Date: 6/26/2016 7:40:00 AM
Excellent piece! Jesus is the answer to it all!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/26/2016 8:07:00 AM
He is and thank you for your kind comment Mike!:)
Date: 6/22/2016 9:45:00 PM
wow, this is a very unique and clever way to get your message across. I was an Avon lady years ago. Those were the days, trudging down the street pulling my baby in the squeaky wagon going door to door and getting maybe one sale per ten houses if I was even lucky!!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/23/2016 7:17:00 AM
I know I was one for a while there too and like you made maybe 1 sale per 10 homes! Thanks for your kind comment Andrea!:)
Date: 6/7/2016 6:58:00 AM
WoW! OH WoW! What a great poem. Filled with so much wisdom and love. I love this. I expected a funny poem when I picked this one to read. Was pleasantly surprised. You just never know how God is going to use you today. Great job. Hope this reaches someone who needs to hear this message. A seven from me. Bravo. God Bless, JB
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/16/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Judy, you are so very kind my friend!:)
Date: 5/26/2016 4:56:00 PM
Cheryl, I like this. I like the spiritually based message, and I like the way you present it poetically. Thank you for sharing it.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/26/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, it just seems like there are so many depressed people out there! Please keep writing your funny poems, they give people a lift!:)
Date: 5/23/2016 2:16:00 PM
This was very well done indeed, Cheryl. There is nothing more sacred than life - Nothing! For without God there can be no life...And without life there can be no God. May your God bless you and protect you, Cheryl Hoffman...Always. My best regards! :) john
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/23/2016 8:37:00 PM
John, thank you so much, you are very kind! May God protect and bless you too! Best regards to you too!:)
Date: 5/18/2016 9:37:00 AM
This poem is surely a 7, Cheryl. Very touching and inspirational. Janice
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/18/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you Janice, you are very kind!:) My nephew would have been 32 years old this July...

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