The Avon Lady

Having another crisis,
and feeling overwhelmed,
Kim stared at the bottle, 
with all the pills,
feeling depressed and dismayed,
she felt she couldn't live another day…
Reaching for the bottle,
screwing off the lid,
she held her palm out
to catch a bunch of pills,
Sitting with them in her hand
on the couch, she thought,
"this is it," and was about
to put them in her mouth,
when all of sudden,
her door bell rang,
and putting the pills aside,
she temporarily postponed
her suicide...
Opening up her door,
stood an Avon lady,
saying to Kim,
"Hi hon, can I come in?"
Kim said "I guess so," with a weak grin,
Their conversation quickly turned
from make-up to Jesus,
Kim explaining to her,
that her life was such a mess,
the avon lady said she also
did Bible studies too,
and before she left
she gave Kim a new Bible,
her cell number,
and a scripture or 2,
Kim looked up the scriptures
and then she read
Jeremiah 1:5,
saying that God knew her
before she was formed
in the womb,
and then Matthew 11:28,
saying that if you pray to God,
that He will give you rest…
after reading those 2 scriptures,
she felt more at peace,
thinking maybe this was all just a test...
thanking God for that Avon ladies advice,
and for making her think twice
about taking her life.

Hebrews 13:2
This poem is dedicated to anyone who is thinking of suicide
and my older sister Patti who lost her son Joey 16 years ago to
suicide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hauser  Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Excellent piece! Jesus is the answer to it all!
Hoffman Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 8:07 AM
He is and thank you for your kind comment Mike!:)
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:45 PM
wow, this is a very unique and clever way to get your message across. I was an Avon lady years ago. Those were the days, trudging down the street pulling my baby in the squeaky wagon going door to door and getting maybe one sale per ten houses if I was even lucky!!
Hoffman Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:17 AM
I know I was one for a while there too and like you made maybe 1 sale per 10 homes! Thanks for your kind comment Andrea!:)
Ball Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 6:58 AM
WoW! OH WoW! What a great poem. Filled with so much wisdom and love. I love this. I expected a funny poem when I picked this one to read. Was pleasantly surprised. You just never know how God is going to use you today. Great job. Hope this reaches someone who needs to hear this message. A seven from me. Bravo. God Bless, JB
Hoffman Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thanks so much Judy, you are so very kind my friend!:)
Schneiter Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Cheryl, I like this. I like the spiritually based message, and I like the way you present it poetically. Thank you for sharing it.
Hoffman Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Thanks so much Paul, it just seems like there are so many depressed people out there! Please keep writing your funny poems, they give people a lift!:)
Fleming Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 2:16 PM
This was very well done indeed, Cheryl. There is nothing more sacred than life - Nothing! For without God there can be no life...And without life there can be no God. May your God bless you and protect you, Cheryl Hoffman...Always. My best regards! :) john
Hoffman Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 8:37 PM
John, thank you so much, you are very kind! May God protect and bless you too! Best regards to you too!:)
Canerdy Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 9:37 AM
This poem is surely a 7, Cheryl. Very touching and inspirational. Janice
Hoffman Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Thank you Janice, you are very kind!:) My nephew would have been 32 years old this July...
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