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The Avalanche

Quietly they slept Quietly the snow fell Quietly the trees swayed Slowly the snow got higher against the tiny window Slowly the wind caused the pines to dance Slowly the mountain watched the storm blow in Quickly the drifts covered the cabin Quickly the wind responded to the mountains request Quickly the trees moved out of the way of the snow Silently the mountain shook her shoulders Silently the snow slid down her back Silently the cabin disappeared from the mountain

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Date: 11/20/2020 3:44:00 AM
I like your unique style and form. Reads like a superb narrative, exotic and soulful. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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