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The Autumn Creek Hotel

It is a small investment; this property out in the scrub. A building that is shabby in it’s ‘hey day’ was a pub. Blackberries scramble over it, with the sheds in disrepair; yes the Autumn Creek Hotel needs a lot of loving care. Starlings filled the rafters with a hundred years of straw. There’s two hundred generations of rabbits underneath the floor. Cobwebs cover every shutter; there’s dirty glasses in a rack. The cellar is a gaping hole with broken bottles clear or black. The hitching rails and stables have been eaten by termites, where the ghosts of Cobb and Co. still linger in the nights. Thankfully the walls of stone are still holding up quite well, so we have a good foundation to restore this old hotel. Joy and I have rolled our sleeves and both picked up a broom. We’re clearing all the rubbish and we’re cleaning every room. And now the pub is empty, from nineteenth century situations. We’re about to take the major step to endowing renovations. Cautiously a slab of timber etched with eighteen sixty-three, was lifted from the door reminding us the Woodall family, established this old hotel and we’ve heard from local folklore, three people died here in this pub, and some say it was four. It’s marvellous what’s found that still adorned the bar room wall. There were plaques; commemoratives that remembered one and all of the patrons who once spent their time in competitions here, and had their names etched up in gold, by each year after year. And so the names of Wilson, Harper, McDougall, Ferris, Moore, stood as champions in Hookey; Billiards. Darts until ‘twenty-four’. There were other competitions but the words have faded now upon the plaques of twisted wood that time has razed somehow. Now it’s time to kill the past with restoration of this place, and bring it up to modern trends by building a new face. But just behind the kitchen chimney, I discovered with aghast, a sport I played in childhood days and why suspicion here was cast. For in behind the kitchen chimney was a hidden cavity, and a skeleton was crouching that was very hard to see. I shone my torch across the bones and something caught my eye. It sparkled in the torches beam - so what did I espy? A golden chain lay on the scapula and hung across the clavicle, but sitting loosely on the ribcage with inscription was a medal, proving way back in those days, competition’s taken seriously … Autumn Creek Hotel - Champ in Hide and Seek - Eighteen Ninety-Three.

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Date: 7/27/2019 8:57:00 PM
Ha ha Lindsay: You never fail to get me with your final line. Love your Autumn Creek Hotel....into my Favs, Best, SuZ
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/1/2019 1:07:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne for putting my verse into your favs. No one must have missed him - Lindsay
Date: 7/10/2019 9:45:00 PM
Fantastic story SO well told, Lindsay. Real clincher of an ending! Janice
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Date: 8/1/2019 1:05:00 AM
Hello Janice - thanks for reading and putting up a comment - regards - Lindsay
Date: 6/30/2019 2:21:00 PM
OH MY< what a hilarious ending!! NObody does great endings like you do, LIndsay.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/30/2019 6:53:00 PM
Hello there Andrea … you have me feeling a mite humble with your encouraging comment. You could picture this scene when renovating - thanks again Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 6/28/2019 5:30:00 AM
"Starlings filled the rafters with a hundred years of straw. There’s two hundred generations of rabbits underneath the floor." When I got to that part I thought "Please do not tell me someone is going to try and refurbish this!" Lovely write. Loved every word.
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Date: 6/30/2019 6:50:00 PM
Hello Caren … some people will go to any lengths to restore some history. Rabbits and Starlings often live in ceilings or beneath homes, especially in rural settings. Kangaroos are now moving into the suburbs - thank you for commenting Caren - Lindsay
Date: 6/27/2019 9:22:00 PM
Lindsay, what a delightful story with an unusual yet intriguing reveal. A Fav for me! ~Mark
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Date: 6/30/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thanks for reading and putting up a comment Mark. I'm pleased you saw the light-heartedness of this little tale - Lindsay
Date: 6/25/2019 7:29:00 PM
Such a fine write Lindsay, great rhyme and flow too with great description of your own title hotel!
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:33:00 AM
Hello Gordon … thanks again for reading and commenting on another one of my verses - Lindsay
Date: 6/25/2019 5:16:00 AM
G'day Lindsay, one doesn't need to see a photo of the hotel...you described it perfectly! Awesome rhyming poem and very well written, just like all of your fantastic writes. Thank you...Charlie
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:32:00 AM
Hello Charles … thanks for Charles for reading and sending such a positive comment - Lindsay
Date: 6/24/2019 11:28:00 PM
Great one Lindsay!
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:29:00 AM
Hey there Timothy … thanks for reading and putting up a comment Mate - Lindsay
Date: 6/23/2019 4:21:00 PM
So IMAGINATIVE, Lindsay! Such an enjoyable romp. I hung on every word. Kudos. ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:28:00 AM
Hello Gershon … I'm pleased you enjoyed this little tale Gershon. I appreciate your positive comment - Lindsay
Date: 6/23/2019 12:47:00 AM
Your stories are always so creative and colorful. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for the great entertainment! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/27/2019 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Connie for the lovely comment. I guess I enjoy allowing my imagination to run riot - Lindsay
Date: 6/22/2019 8:57:00 PM
You must be Australia's champion campfire story-teller! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/27/2019 1:35:00 AM
G'day Rico … I keep telling myself that, but self praise is no praise is it - thanks Mate - Lindsay

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