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The Author of Forever's Serenade

When the author of forever sang his serenade, ‘twas longing in a virgin’s heart, the strings he played. So liltingly and stirringly did words cascade, they conjured scent of rose bouquets in serenade. Of everlasting love he crooned in serenade. Bliss never is inopportune. His lure was laid. As sweet refrains flowed through her veins, the vow he made was happiness without an end in serenade. Upon the troubadour who sang the serenade, she smiled, led him by the hand to grassy glade. And there beneath a blushing sky, beguiled maid succumbed with heady soul that rang with serenade. The author of forever, who croons serenades, woos the maids, then into the horizon fades. His lyrics penned are fiction; he’ll be not delayed from moving on, oh vagrant bard of serenade. Posted 5/30/2021 NA for Charlotte Puddifoot's Open Poetry 5 Poetry Contest for Brian Strand's All Yours(Jun 8) Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/17/2021 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your winning lyrics. Enjoyed reading them. It kind of reminds me of a Ghazal for some reason. Sara
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Date: 6/9/2021 4:05:00 AM
Beautifully penned.....Congrats on your win Andrea....Hugs, Shonima.
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Date: 6/8/2021 5:58:00 PM
Andrea, so nicely rhymed, nearly lyrical this interesting serenade. Congrats on your fine placement.
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Date: 6/8/2021 3:05:00 PM
Such a sad ending, but beautifully written. So deserving of a 1st place win! Congrats, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/2/2021 11:04:00 PM
Captivating serenade, Andrea:)
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Date: 5/31/2021 8:18:00 PM
Beautiful write captivating like the style and flow well penned xx
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Date: 5/31/2021 7:57:00 PM
Love it, Andrea. It's a very moving poem.
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Date: 5/31/2021 6:07:00 PM
wow!! great poem.
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Date: 5/31/2021 9:59:00 AM
A well penned lyric that rhymes and flows so well dear Andrea... I loved this line 'So liltingly and stirringly did words cascade..' and '.grassy glade'.... 'beneath a blushing sky, beguiled made... '.. beautiful alliterations I see..Have a lovely day dear.... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/31/2021 9:58:00 AM
Andrea, "Of everlasting love he crooned ~ in serenade. ~~ Bliss never is inopportune. ~ His lure was laid." If that isn't poetry I don't want to know what is. A Fave. -Richard
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Date: 5/31/2021 6:56:00 AM
Beautifully written and well expressed with great imagery this should be a winner. Love the emotion here. The tale of a lady wooed, won and cast aside. An old but not forgotten song. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/31/2021 1:10:00 AM
There goes the last of the virgins. Are there any left?
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Date: 5/30/2021 11:24:00 PM
What a fraud he was Andrea, he serenades you, woos you and then leaves you moving onto another conquest, there are most unfortunately people like this lurking around. I love, love this poem and hope it gets POTD. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 5/30/2021 6:27:00 PM
Fine writing, as always, Andrea. I enjoyed the "vagrant bard of serenade." He sings so convincingly and, then, must move on!
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