Curtis Moorman Poet Rhyme

The Atheist

THE ATHEIST

Some misguided man named Darwin
Gained notariety with his theory of evolution
The world foolishly agreed with him
Thinkin he had found the solution

To the existence of man on earth
And as humans how we evolved 
His theory soon gave birth
And the mystery of man was resolved

But Darwin and all his followers
Are oh so sadly wrong
And one day they will discover
 Darwin's theory was a cymbal gong

God, the Creator of all that is
Made the heavens and the earth
He, and only He, made man out of dust
Adam was the beginning of man's birth

Belief that God is a myth
Will cause the believer great pain
The flames in the pit of hellfire
Will be their final gain

So I say to the atheist
Set Darwin's theory aside
Put your belief in God's Only Son
Because Charles Darwin lied

24 November 2018
For the contest sponsored by Anthony Slausen

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L. J. Carber December 7, 2018 at 12:04 PM Like St. Paul, I found God the hard way as a young man who did a very stupid thing c. 50 years ago. Suffice it to say I experienced the reality of my soul, an eternal consciousness, as well as both God's power and His grace. So in that spirit let me remind you Curtis, that Jesus himself made it clear that judgment is God's alone. Hell and heaven are real but nobody can be certain which world they'll go to next: that is the purpose of faith. Love thy neighbor means atheists as well, doesn't it? Curtis Moorman December 7, 2018 at 10:23 PM Yes, L. J. , it definitely does mean love the neighbor and I apologize for any implication that I don't love atheists. I do, however believe they are sorely misled and in danger of hellfire unless the Bible is entirely wrong. I appreciate your response and thank you for sharing. Merry Christmas!

Beata Agustin December 7, 2018 at 12:10 AM "Put your belief in God's Only Son" Very well said, expressed in faith. God be praised and thanked for your poem; and for you, too, for declaring your theistic belief in the Lord. God bless you. Curtis Moorman December 7, 2018 at 5:56 AM Beata, it's Christians like you on Soup who can, and d make a difference in the life of others. Thank you for sharing your belief with me and with them. Jesus said, Go ye....and you did. I admire and appreciate that in you. May God's richest Blessings be yours. Merry Christimas!

Line Gauthier December 6, 2018 at 7:27 PM Awesome, Curtis. Congrats on your well deserved win. Curtis Moorman December 6, 2018 at 8:55 PM Thank you, Line! If I have not yet done so, I want to wish you a Merry Christmas!

Terry Flood December 6, 2018 at 6:31 PM Poetry soup says to only offer words of encouragement, I take that to mean, if you can’t say something nice or encouraging... say nothing. As a mistaken, hoodwinked idiot, I therefore say nothing. Curtis Moorman December 6, 2018 at 8:52 PM Terry, you are a unique individual. Your openness and honesty are to be admired by anyone. Your wish to me to have a happy Christmas is accepted with pleasure and gratitude. I am truly pleased to make your acquaintance. By the way, the picture of your dog is beautiful. It reminds me of my dog, Amber, that I had when I was in the Air Force. Curtis Moorman December 6, 2018 at 8:44 PM Terry, thank you for your response. I admire and respect you for the way you expressed it. I appreciate your honesty. Happy Holidays to you and yours! Terry Flood December 6, 2018 at 7:22 PM None of us will know the truth until we’ve breathed our last. Then, we’ll either know nothing at all or we’ll Know that we were right or wrong... either way, we won’t be able to advise mankind. So this debate will run and run. By the way... whilst I am 95% athiest and 5% agnostic, my values are Christian, so I feel no hypocrisy in wishing you a very happy Christmas. Curtis Moorman December 6, 2018 at 7:08 PM Terry, thanks for your response. I respect the way you expressed it and I respect your openness in saying it. I appreciate your honesty and I wish you Happy Holidays.

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2018 at 6:34 PM I know where you are coming from (having been the daughter of my very religious mother), but I tend to be a bit more open minded. I know there is a God because creation itself is the proof, but at the same time, there is proof for Darwin's theory (or at least some of his "ideas") Who can really say how things evolved and maybe it was all part of God's plan.. . (at least certain aspects of it). Anyway, this is a very thoughtful poem sure to be a hit among stalwart christians! I admire your faith! Curtis Moorman November 28, 2018 at 9:21 AM Bless you, Andrea, for your kindness and sincerity in this response. You are, and always have been, an inspiration to me over the years. I admire your gift of poetic excellence and your encouragement to me in shaping my career as a 'writer of rhymes' which has turned into a career of learning how to 'become a poet like you'! Merry Christmas, my dear friend and inspiration.

Constance La France November 26, 2018 at 9:56 AM Curtis , some people believe in Darwin but in those last moments of life, I wonder who they call for? We must believe in some higher power or this world would be an empty and an dark void, I love your poem, well done ~ Curtis Moorman November 26, 2018 at 11:02 AM Constance, I am so pleased that you share my feelings. As I indicated in my response to Tom, Darwin had a brilliant mind. He just channeled it in what I consider the wrong direction. I'm honored that you 'love my poem'. Blessings on you!

Tom Cunningham November 25, 2018 at 3:21 PM Some of his theories' were full of holes and he put it down to the miraculous , what does that say, well written Curtis. Tom Curtis Moorman November 25, 2018 at 6:13 PM I know I probably started a rumble with this, but although Darwin had a brilliant mind, he was sorely off track with most of his theories and led a lot of people astray. I am not totally correct in my assessment of his theories in my poem, but it gives food for thought.

Arturo Michael November 24, 2018 at 8:04 AM A bold and fearless write...Amen...All the best Curtis Curtis Moorman November 25, 2018 at 6:14 PM Thanks, Arturo! I just thought I'd 'stir the pot'!