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The Ashen Raindrop

Volcanic spat and gracefully fleeing, clawing free from cloying breath. Flame and fire, bolt and thunder Lofty pride puffs its wheezing lungs. Pumice stone, hiss possessed, Soar and tumble, spew and tremble, pyroclastic gush, clean sweep scrapes Its hellish gush claws the land. As pumice specks float on layers new, Tumble- turn- spin, climbs to climes. Clouded cold as tears cling to specks, And weighted grief drags them down. Freefalling grace and rainbow hewn, Falling to destruction and soft explosions. They assault the growling beauty beast, As its serpents hiss rages at rest.

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John Loving Iii

Date: 4/17/2013 7:37:00 AM

I it 've never seen that force of nature but you have discribed it well . Thanks for stoping by

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 9:01:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your work, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poems.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/16/2013 6:23:00 PM

really captures the essence of the volcano. We have one erupting on the big island of Hawaii and when the wind comes from the Kona direction we get the vog. Welcome and thanks for visiting my page. SuZ

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 9:00:00 AM

Thank you for reading and comments on my poem, I really enjoy reading your poems.

James Peranteau

Date: 4/16/2013 2:58:00 PM

Diddo with PD's comment dear poet ! I look forward to reading you with intensity.......have a wonderful week....much love, james

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 8:58:00 AM

Hi and thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. You to have a great week.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

Very creative, expressive and unique work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..In this one is some great poetic techniques..Thanks for stopping by my work..Welcome to soup..Sara

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for the welcome and taking the time to read and comment on my poem its greatly appreciated.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2013 1:51:00 PM

I like the freefalling grace and spirit of your poem. Seosamh, all with rage shall rest ... this was a very interesting poem. I have to read more to learn about your writes.. always~ Linda

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments and reading my poem

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/16/2013 1:37:00 PM

An explosion of beautiful language use, erupted at the heart of one's mind!

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words.