The Artist And The Winter Vine

She is eighteen and tattoos are the latest rage." I'd like a tattoo please" she asks. I see a young girl in a messy ponytail and wonder if she'll pick something gaudy, then I will have to oblige.  
The boldness of youth
can appear so uncouth
yet reveal so much truth.  
"I want a tattoo of a winter vine.  One that won't fade with time" As the machine begins to “buzz” the armature bar hits the coil and I begin to work. Stretched on her upper arm I notice the discoloration of skin, a slow petering  bruise. 
Eyes color of snake
she is all heartache 
I take a break...
"Why did you choose a vine?" I ask, as the coil tattoo gun soothes her ears.  "Last memory of my mom is from a trip to the winery.  She told me the sap sinks into the roots and the vine falls asleep until the next year.
the tendril climbs 
this is her time
not mine 
From her handbag, fifty old crumpled dollar bills.  " How much do I owe?" she asks.  I say " No charge." She smiles and then leaves, as if on cue...
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Crandall Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Well written and poignant Mystic Rose
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem David
DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Lovely, heartfelt story, Vie -- no charge when the heart is purely engaged.
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 6:15 PM
thanks for reading Joe
Gifford Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 3:39 AM
Hello Rose, this is such a lovely piece and a great story. Loved the picture too. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Have a great day.
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 6:14 PM
thank you Zyrool
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 1:39 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful write/story/picture. Love your ending. "Good Luck" if you the contest... Have a blessed day............
Rose  Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. I appreciate your vote of confidence in me Paula
Goff Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Intense coiling of my brain, love it!
Rose  Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting dear James :)
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