The Arrival Of Night

Dusk unveils the stars, light by light; as blue morphs into ebony. And as silhouettes fade from sight, scarlet bleeds from a dying sun, marking the arrival of night. Slowly absorbing pinks and greys, chameleon clouds switch off white. And Luna rises splendidly; like a Chinese lantern in flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 6:25 AM
“ Scarlet bleeds from a dying sun, affirming that its reign is done.” this is just beyond deep and artistic what you’ve delivered there in such a poetic manner. I love the way you’ve written using alliterations and colors here . So captivating as always. Congratulations on being placed in brians contest
Pinet Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Thank you so much Ink Empress, you never fail to bring a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 6:11 AM
This is an appealing new form that is enhanced by your creative lines of day giving way to night, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Thanks, Lin, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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