The Archer

The archer stood very still by the oceans edge
His target was a buoy, tossed far from his ledge

Aiming high against the sky he let his arrow go
Elements unforgiving bounced the buoy to and fro 

The archer through experience had adjusted aim
In account the wind and waves he aspired to tame

Although the arrow missed it's mark, it was quite close
Few could call that chosen path that he would diagnose

In life the ones who love you, can help form a plan
About the wind and waves, and where you might land

What you might encounter I don't pretend to know
But with a plan you just might land where you want to go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Otieno Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:18 PM
Inspirational
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!......pat
Carson Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 1:39 PM
HI Pat, what a positive message, cheers, Rachel
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Rachel, that means a lot!......pat
Bangalee Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 1:46 AM
greatly done; enjoyed; love it
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Mahtab!!......80)
Tripp Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Pat...this is a fantastic write. The rhyme is spot on, the message is beautiful, and it is very well put together to achieve that message. It's a fav!
Adams Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Oh, that is really sweet Rhoda. I'm happy you liked it!....xx....pat
Bauer Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 6:20 PM
good one, pat! i like the whole image of the archer and the larger meaning of the poem as well...
Adams Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Thank you Ilene. That means a lot!
Hoffman Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 5:52 PM
A very encouraging creative write Pat! Happy New Year!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Cheryl...................pat
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