The Archer

The archer stood very still by the oceans edge
His target was a buoy, tossed far from his ledge

Aiming high against the sky he let his arrow go
Elements unforgiving bounced the buoy to and fro 

The archer through experience had adjusted aim
In account the wind and waves he aspired to tame

Although the arrow missed it's mark, it was quite close
Few could call that chosen path that he would diagnose

In life the ones who love you, can help form a plan
About the wind and waves, and where you might land

What you might encounter I don't pretend to know
But with a plan you just might land where you want to go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/27/2019 11:18:00 PM
Inspirational
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Pat Adams
Date: 6/28/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!......pat
Date: 6/27/2019 1:39:00 PM
HI Pat, what a positive message, cheers, Rachel
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Pat Adams
Date: 6/28/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Rachel, that means a lot!......pat
Date: 6/25/2019 1:46:00 AM
greatly done; enjoyed; love it
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Pat Adams
Date: 6/28/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Mahtab!!......80)
Date: 1/2/2018 11:15:00 AM
Pat...this is a fantastic write. The rhyme is spot on, the message is beautiful, and it is very well put together to achieve that message. It's a fav!
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/2/2018 12:04:00 PM
Oh, that is really sweet Rhoda. I'm happy you liked it!....xx....pat
Date: 1/1/2018 6:20:00 PM
good one, pat! i like the whole image of the archer and the larger meaning of the poem as well...
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/1/2018 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. That means a lot!
Date: 1/1/2018 5:52:00 PM
A very encouraging creative write Pat! Happy New Year!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/1/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl...................pat
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