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The Archer

The Archer S-shy but saucy A-Able to relate G-Gleeful and sometimes goofy I-inward looking T-Temperate being T-Tender feelings A-Absent minded R-Rascal at heart I-Idealist still U-Unaffected ways S-Safe..a sanctuary

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/5/2009 1:17:00 PM

Dearest Barbeeg, BARBARA JEAN, I am learning more about YOU everyday I feel that a POET puts a little bit of themselves in each POEM they write A sagittarius is very compatible with Virgo YOU and I LOVE YOU ALWAYS With all my Heart...HG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/21/2009 3:52:00 PM

You did a beautiful job with this challenge. My mom is a Sagittarius and these traits are true to form. Excellent job, Barbara! Good luck! Love, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2009 7:28:00 PM

Barbara, now I want to get to know a Sagittarius. Love those who are "Rascals at heart," but tender hearted as well. Thank you for reading "Blizzard." Now there are 3 Barbaras in my life: my sister, my best friend, and my newest friend. Bless you, Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/18/2009 5:37:00 AM

LOve the line about being shy but saucy, that leaves some interesting thought for the reader. Very well written. Michael

Daver Austin

Date: 2/17/2009 2:54:00 PM

Enjoyed. My son is an archer...the letters fit rather loosely, gleeful and goofy being the closest. Love, daver

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/16/2009 8:02:00 PM

Nice work BG, this acrostic is excellent and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/16/2009 7:55:00 PM

Good Acrostic Barbara. Says a lot about a person. I'm an Aries, but according to the description of an Aries I'm the complete opposite...lol, go figure.