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Here's hoping Joe Biden gets hired, It’s what all his voters desired, He can then say to Trump, (the arrogant lump), Hey Donald, I'm Potus - ‘YOU’RE FIRED !!! 20/05/20

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2020 12:10:00 PM

lol, yep, the whole world needs to shout that - don may get the message then

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2020 12:24:00 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2020 11:23:00 AM

I love this one also, you are awesome with limericks my friend. What scares me is that our dear Donald is a lose cannon for about 9 or 10 weeks! And he has brain washed the republican voters hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 12:15:00 PM

You are so right Jennifer the thought of him being in power until January is such a worry:-) I had SUCH fun writing this one - they only take me 2 mins to write I just adore the limerick form:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/8/2020 6:03:00 PM

I watch and am still surprised which in itself is amazing.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:58:00 AM

thanks caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 11/6/2020 1:42:00 PM

I can't wait for old Joe to turn to Trump and say "you're fired" that would be awesome! Great job Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:58:00 AM

it would be great to turn the tables on him:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2020 1:16:00 AM

A Hobson's choice. Both are worthless. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:57:00 AM

Well.. anything is better for the world than the orange oompah loompah!:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 11/5/2020 9:57:00 PM

Ha, great writing, Jan! And yet we all wait to hear the results. Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:56:00 AM

the right man has been hired!:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/5/2020 9:09:00 PM

I heartily applaud the clever, incising precision of your talented pen, Jan! Fantastic!! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:53:00 AM

thanks Susan i had SUCH fun with this poem:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/5/2020 6:36:00 PM

Nothing worse than a bad loser, when John McCain lost to Obama he gave a brilliant speech wishing Obama good luck, Trump should take a leaf out of his book, Another 3 years and it will be bye bye bungling bozo Boris lol. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 4:53:00 AM

He should bow down gracefully but the arrogant oaf cant stand losing!:-( hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2020 3:55:00 PM

I think that's what happening... Disgusted that the lawyers will now take over and dig in to every picayune issue with their manure-laden shovels. Trump ought to just say, Go, Joe! and Good Luck! But no. He's got to drag this election into the mud now... And so it goes... :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 4:05:00 PM

lets hope Joe is squeaky clean and wins fair and square, trump is like a spoiled brat... its his way or no way, what a pathetic example he sets:-( hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/5/2020 2:58:00 PM

Words we hope to hear, Nicely done Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 4:00:00 PM

thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/5/2020 2:36:00 PM

G’day Jan … many were hoping that he’d get bitten on the bum, and this just might be the day - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 4:00:00 PM

lets hope so Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/5/2020 1:13:00 PM

jan - this is the most perfect trumpty limerick i've read! love it! (and hope it comes true..)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 3:55:00 PM

so glad you dropped by Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/5/2020 11:21:00 AM

The poetic wish of MILLIONS! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 3:45:00 PM

lets hope it comes true Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/5/2020 11:01:00 AM

- ... :))) ... (the arrogant lump) ... he will cry and blame everyone else - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 3:40:00 PM

yes he is already threatening legal action - moronic man!:-( hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/5/2020 8:58:00 AM

Oh no, Jan! That honor would not be Biden's alone. Many of us are waiting for the chance to loudly blend our voices together to say those words because he works for US, although he has never looked at the Presidency that way. Let's hope it happens and he gets booted out of the White House.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2020 10:03:00 AM

Hi Jenna, I've edited the poem a little ... and added a video, it is wishful thinking this will happen:-) hugs Jan xx