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Global web iconE pluribus unum =Out of many, one. Great Seal of the United States, being one of the nation's mottos at the time of the seal's creation

Counterintuitive Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Suzette Richards

11.12.24

Contest Winner MedalFirst Place

The Anointed One

Anointed by God to rule the land
Yet brags where he places his molesting hand
Let us love one another, all children of God
Yet puts proxies before a firing squad
The Lord he praised and the Bible he thumped
Yet adherents of the Word neither phased nor stumped
Turn to God when forgiveness you seek
Yet replies NO, never shall I be unmanly/meek
In the eyes of God, we are all alike
Yet the misbegotten can all take a hike
Obey my command and I’ll offer benevolence
As I give E pluribus unum a whole new relevance
God hath anointed His faithful avatar for you
Yet now go and do as I say, not as I do
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mysore Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 6:02 PM
congratulations dear poet friend.
Anaya Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 2:31 PM
Belated ty Thriveni!
Gorelick Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Back with congratulations on your most relevant and timely win, Anaya! MNM eat your heart out! My best, Robert
Anaya Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 2:32 PM
Belated ty, Robert!
Beaufort Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Anaya, you point out the extreme irony of the situation we have with clarity. It confirms something with poetic grace that seems unfortunate for all of us...that we have an anti-christ with disciples in charge. Very well done. Smiles!
Anaya Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Evangelists were a crucial element in his election and therefore I used their God as having anointed him our fallen leader, (counterintuitive) an unrepented sinner and his devotees!! Ty, Duke.
Gorelick Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Clever, concise, and cutting! None can deny such blatant contradictions. It would be amusing if not so tragic. Your contribution to the contest is not just well-done but supremely important and relevant. My best, Robert
Anaya Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Ty Robert! I surely enjoyed your contribution as well "The Rules of War" is certainly a stunner! May the best man or woman win:):)
Rolland Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 6:50 AM
so precious message, anaya, i love the ending, most people talk but don't act, that is a reason the world is in trouble i think have a nice day
Anaya Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 8:51 AM
I agree with you Yann, we should speak up for what we believe in. Ty! It's a nice day *73 degrees
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Ah yes there is counterintuitiveness in your words Anaya, well someone else’s and no prizes for guessing his name, (out of many, one) has risen to the top again, a real life lava lamp, primed to benevolently erupt, not! great one for contest, best of luck, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 11:39 AM
all are victims of the in-house playboy ~ he says trump we say how high
Anaya Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:30 AM
David, Ty! I Love the lava lamp metaphor. He is appointing his cabinet, loyalty first and No credentials needed! A FOX News Host! as our Secretary of Defense! The most powerful military force in the world, just because they agreed on the show that women should no longer serve in combat rolls. RFK JR as our Health expert, will oversee our Dept of Health & Human practices, and urge us away from vaccinations! fluoride causes retardation, stuff like that. This is our new reality. I read your very first poem "Your Country Needs You" satire concerning the irony of the brutal business of war, in skillful rhyme and rhythm. Like you I am not against war or pro war is that counterintuitive? lol. War is the result of the failure of diplomacy!!
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