The Anguish of the Creation

The anguish of the creation
is carried deep into the wind’s heart
and alights upon the clouds
so that it will come back
as a gushing water 
upon the Earth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 7:30 PM
Another gem!!
Ponce Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:56 AM
The way you wrote this piece made me think again about how much man has used and abused the Earth and it's painful on a whole new level. A great write still. :)
Comporozos Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Thanks a lot for your comments. I did not have, of course, in mind only our planet, but man as an individual and as part of humankind, that is the anguish of every human being
Devnath  Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 12:48 PM
May be, but nicely penned. Loved always, bl
Comporozos Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:42 AM
I mean that through pain we can become better human beings so that pain will be a means, a well let's say, into which we will find water to quench our spiritual thirst.
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