Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Senryu

The Angels Sing-W

O lord, lack virtues
Teach us mercy, love,Holiness
To teach on return.

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Tenth place winner
Contest: "Sunday Senryu" "Angelic Anthem" of Landa-marie, the sweetheart

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Robin Davis May 8, 2014 at 8:39 AM Dr. Ram So few words but loaded with wisdom, deepness, truth and power. Thank you for the nice comment on my Cowboys poem.

Kaila B.A August 18, 2010 at 4:47 AM you are a brilliant poet!! love it!

Brandee Augustus August 13, 2010 at 1:23 PM I am quite sure that this is definitely one of things that the angels sing about concerning us as humans. Congratulations! This is spot on!

Susan Mills August 12, 2010 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on your win! What a terriffic Sunday senyru! Love, Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown August 12, 2010 at 9:45 AM Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Sunday Senryu-An Angelic Anthem". Love, Carol

Constance La France August 8, 2010 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on your win with this heavenly senryu <*.*>

Francine Roberts August 8, 2010 at 6:59 PM congrats on your win with this lovely senryu

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 8, 2010 at 6:21 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my Sunday Senryu contest with this beautiful entry.. appreciate your constant support ..with luv..

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2010 at 1:40 PM Lovely Senryu. Thank you for my 8th place in your Pantoum contest. It was a fun try at a new form. Love, Joyce

August 7, 2010 at 10:30 PM This is a wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed it. Thank you for all your nice comments on my poetry. Best wishes in the contest... Love Scarlett

Wilma Neels August 7, 2010 at 10:18 PM It would be amazing if we adhere to your advice Dr Ram.. All the best for the contest ~ Wilma

Jay Del Fierro August 7, 2010 at 10:01 PM no doubt,even in these times,as we struggle to relate and understand the conflicts we all share,directly or indirectly... very nice senryu with a thought provoking theme....peace , jay

Carolyn Devonshire August 7, 2010 at 9:00 PM A beautiful prayer, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse August 7, 2010 at 8:03 PM enjoyed reading today, truly uplifting work!

Charles Henderson August 7, 2010 at 7:07 PM Lovely thought Dr. Ram. It would do us all good to do a little learning and teaching. Charles