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The Angel and Three Wishes

Let me tell you about the amazing dream I had last night I was approached by a beautiful woman bathed in bright light She granted me three wishes with certain rules and conditions I agreed to her terms and asked to begin with her permission My first wish I said, "To have a cure for all cancer." She shook her head and said, "What a splendid choice and answer!" My second wish, "To live in a world free of war, hatred, and disease." She smiled and said, "I'll grant you all of these!" My final wish, I looked at her pretty face and did not hesitate. "I long for your embrace and to find my soulmate." Looking me in the eyes she took my hand To my surprise she said, "Your wish is my command!" *Written specifically for Amy Green's contest "If I could have 3 wishes"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2010 7:11:00 AM
Three wonderful wishes Jimmy, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:09:00 AM
great ending jimmy and congrats on your HM :D
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Amy's Wishes contest.. special wishes indeed and deserving write bestowed on u by this honor... enjoyed and wish they come true too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:36:00 PM
great poem Jimmy, really enjoyed.
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:53:00 AM
Now isn't that the nicest thing? Liked the ending of your poem, Jimmy! Wishing you all the best in the contest!
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Date: 4/26/2010 5:45:00 PM
Perfect wishes, JAM....May all your wishes come true!! This is also another winner....PB
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:19:00 AM
Anohter great write Jimmy! loved it, good luck in contest! love Simone
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Date: 4/26/2010 9:22:00 AM
Love it. I seem to like most of your work that I have read. Keep it up! Guess I am going to have to go read more of them!
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