The Anatomy of a Break-Up

I choose elective surgery.
Yes, that will do the trick.
Make my inside match my outside
so I'm no longer sick. 

First, I'll take my heart out,
remove it from my chest, 
scrub away the pain of you,
but choose to leave the rest. 

Then I'll pluck my eyeballs, 
right out of my skull
filter them with shades of rose
so life won't be so dull.

Then I'll saw my head off
so I can see my brain.
I'll sanitize it thoroughly, 
so no sad thought remains. 

I'll sandpaper my lips down
until they've lost your kiss.
With no sense memory remaining
there'll be nothing left to miss.

But then I must peel off 
every single fingertip,
if I'm to lose the feeling
of touching your soft lips.

I will plug my ears with tar,
so I can't hear your song.
And as my head grows heavy,
it's destined to grow strong.

Now I must plug my nose
so I can't be deceived
into thinking you are near
when at long last I am freed. 

And I elect to cut
my tongue out of my head 
so I'll no longer crave 
the taste of things unsaid.

And once I've cleared my senses
of their memories of you,
I'll look into the mirror
and see my work is through. 

But wait, something has happened!
I don't know what that is.
It appears something is missing,
for it needs a soul to live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 3, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Sally, thank you for the wonderful reply
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Hi Sally. Congrats for your #3 placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
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February 1, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Sally, congrats on your pensive write!
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February 2, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Thank you so much Balveen! X
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February 1, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Deep write, Sally, lovely win. LINDA
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February 2, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting and commenting. Appreciate your kindness. X
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February 1, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Hi Sally,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Bowles Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Thanks for the congrats Skat! And for the continued support! X
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February 1, 2016 at 12:46 PM
This poem is simply brilliant. It deserves to be on top. Congratulations! #7 Cheers, Connie
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February 2, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Thank you Connie! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! X
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February 1, 2016 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations on your win! I really liked how you did this, very clever, very well written. A 7
Bowles Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your kind words!
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February 1, 2016 at 1:52 AM
Sally, congratulations on your win in Viv's contest with this deep and powerful write ~
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February 2, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Thanks Constance, and congrats to you on your beautiful win! X
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February 1, 2016 at 1:42 AM
Congrats Sally on your win. The best surgeon I have found is time.
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February 2, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Thanks for the congrats Rob and for sharing your insight. X
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