The Altar Weeps

Hearts torn asunder
    the altar of love weeps
  into mankind's service
    Venom slinking, seeps

  O, calm, reign supreme
    peace, into the home stream
  voices raised, rising, all is lost
    Rancor's chorus exacts its cost
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 10:59 AM
I also want calm to "reign supreme" as I figure this is closer to the supreme.
Rhymer Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 9:18 PM
We are instructed seek peace and pursue it showing it must be worked at if we are to grasp hold of it.Enjoyed Mr.Wolf.
Hawkins Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Even a little piece of peace would be a start in this crazy world we live in at this time.
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Words of peace written here we need much of it in our homes. Thanks for sharing Gershon. Be blessed my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:39 PM
And may you receive all the blessings of the season, Michael. :) gw
Proxenos Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Peace, love and harmony in the home, we pray it always is so. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:32 PM
So glad to hear you're on the road to recovery, Jennifer. You gave me a scare there! ~ Save the scares for Halloween, ok?
Hankins Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Indeed. I know of a wedding last weekend that was more a sad than happy occasion.
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:35 PM
That's sad, alright. Funereal weddings. Whew!
Rose  Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 9:45 PM
May he bring peace in every home around the world Gershon, lovely thoughts penned, thank you
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:39 PM
Yes, indeed. Peace starts in the home and the hearth. Blessings and Bounty!
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