The Altar Weeps

Hearts torn asunder
    the altar of love weeps
  into mankind's service
    Venom slinking, seeps

  O, calm, reign supreme
    peace, into the home stream
  voices raised, rising, all is lost
    Rancor's chorus exacts its cost

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Date: 9/29/2022 10:59:00 AM
I also want calm to "reign supreme" as I figure this is closer to the supreme.
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Date: 9/28/2022 9:18:00 PM
We are instructed seek peace and pursue it showing it must be worked at if we are to grasp hold of it.Enjoyed Mr.Wolf.
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Date: 9/28/2022 8:17:00 PM
Even a little piece of peace would be a start in this crazy world we live in at this time.
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Date: 9/28/2022 12:33:00 PM
Words of peace written here we need much of it in our homes. Thanks for sharing Gershon. Be blessed my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/28/2022 5:39:00 PM
And may you receive all the blessings of the season, Michael. :) gw
Date: 9/28/2022 8:31:00 AM
Peace, love and harmony in the home, we pray it always is so. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/28/2022 5:32:00 PM
So glad to hear you're on the road to recovery, Jennifer. You gave me a scare there! ~ Save the scares for Halloween, ok?
Date: 9/28/2022 7:54:00 AM
Indeed. I know of a wedding last weekend that was more a sad than happy occasion.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/28/2022 5:35:00 PM
That's sad, alright. Funereal weddings. Whew!
Date: 9/27/2022 9:45:00 PM
May he bring peace in every home around the world Gershon, lovely thoughts penned, thank you
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/28/2022 5:39:00 PM
Yes, indeed. Peace starts in the home and the hearth. Blessings and Bounty!
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