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The Altar of Her Love

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Sitting perched amid sanguines perfumed pillows ~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Visceral emotions stirring deep inside of torrents * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Gypsies carousel heart; feelings, I hadn't quite known before... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * As gazing upon her lovely Roseates Beauty * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Through transparents joyful pervious silk; vistives de jour canopy ~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Sunlit enhancement embracing the warmth of this pleasure as * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Silhouetted perfection begins whispering her desires... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Aurora borealis rising in this dawning as she smiles; celestial light's * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Like shooting stars within my own breast risen these, temples of temptations * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Joy, wishing to collide now in this the church of, her soulful seductions ~ * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ...“A Virgin, Upon The Altar of Her Heavenly Love.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 8:37:00 PM
You gotta be on my fav list. Who can tell it like you do! "Pum Pum" XXX
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:27:00 AM
I love this 'Gypsies carousel heart':) Your poetry holds much passion inside it. Hugs, Emilia
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/24/2011 3:50:00 AM
* “Ahhh * Thank You * Beautiful Emilia. * Tis Passion Is Your Lovely Name * Beauty * Is Just A Mirror of Your Priceless Reflection Away. * Kissses & Hugs * Hugs & Kissses * With Lips of Luv * Soft * Sarah” *
Date: 5/23/2011 7:01:00 AM
Your poetry is lovely as you are:) very good write.
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/23/2011 8:35:00 AM
* “Thank You * Beautiful & Lovely Lisa. * Tis Right Back At Your Beauty My Dear * Sooo Sweeet. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Warm Soft Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 4:48:00 PM
Hello Sarah Are you from Alaska? The aurora borealis is a beautiful sight! I think we are born romantics. Thank you for your kind, romantic comments on my poems. I want to do more variety and I feel an urge to write more and more, more power to you! Dalila
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 6:45:00 PM
* “Beautiful Dalila. * Tis Extremely Easy I Find * When Discovering The Jewels of A Light Sooo Treasurous * As Your Beautiful Self. * Romance * Love * Sincerety * Admiration * Etc. * Is The Most Natural & Fitting of All Things * To Tell Their Beauty * So * Know This About Myself * As I Hopefully Continue to Behold The Beauty of Your Endless Eyes * Upon The Shores of Lovely. * Thank You * With This Blessing of Myself Amid * The Ocean of Your AquaBlue * Hugs & Kissses * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 3:00:00 PM
B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L :) Sarah :) Blessing's
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 12/12/2011 1:32:00 PM
Had another read really lovely x Dawnie
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 5/22/2011 3:32:00 PM
May your day be happy and your night's full of Joy sweet lady...i'll say goodnight and dreamsweet. You are welcome :)
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 3:19:00 PM
* “No Heavenly Lady * Tis Your Glowing * Which Is Beautiful * My Dear Beautiful Dawn. * But Thank You * For Making My Heart Skip A Beat * Sooo Lovely * And Sooo Very Sweeet. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 2:40:00 PM
good progress WOW are those **** distracting...phew trance inducing! ;) Light & Love
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 3:12:00 PM
* “Come On My Dear Brilliant & Beyond Beautiful Debbie. * Don't Be to hard on my Virgin Verse Self * My Love * I Mean Hey * I'm Just A little Hillbilly Girl From The Backwoods of Nowhere * Trying to Make It In A Great Big Poetic Realm World * With All The Elite Transports From The 15th & 16th Centuries * You Know??? * Yet * Tis Such A Joy & Honour * To Behold Your Beautiful Light. * Like A Dream * Thank You * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 12:11:00 PM
wow, i cant wait, beautiful writing and the anticipation is overwhelming,,,,,,thanks again for your wonderful comments on my work, you all have made me feel so welcome..i am just a construction worker with the desire to learn to write and sharing is such a blessing...
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 12:37:00 PM
* “I Hear You Dear John * Keep Building Those Castles In The Sky * And * Thanks for Coming By * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 10:57:00 AM
such perfection Sarah in your lines so passionate and tender too.. looking forward to Little Princess as well ..again thankxx for those amazing comments and birthday wishes and kisses luv..
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 12:48:00 PM
* “Owww * Tis My Beautiful Beautiful Queen. * The Lady That Stirs My Dreams * The Woman That I Luv * Sooo Very Deeeply * My Beautiful Linda Marie * My Baby * Tis Good to Behold Your Beauty * My Love. * Hugs & Kissses * In Sweeet Delicious * Warm Wet Wishes * Thank You * Your Sarah.” *
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Star Light
Date: 5/22/2011 12:02:00 PM
~Dear Sarah.. addressing your com.. Only in Christ.. tis Love for you.. Come to Jesus..
Date: 5/22/2011 10:15:00 AM
very different i may say right to the point. and yet beautiful. thank you for commenting on Sweet Child.
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 10:47:00 AM
* “Thank You Dear James * Always A Delight * When Given Words Sooo Bright * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 6:32:00 AM
Sarah, thank you so much for the beautiful lovely warming comment's you have not just made me smile, But also my heart is smiling to...bless you sweet lady may the sun shine on you and everything you ink Luv Dawnie..".as this is my nickname" Thank you once again Angel smile's
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 5/22/2011 6:54:00 AM
You are so welcome ???*??? ??\|/?? --- Sweet Lady--- thank you Sarah ...??/|\?? ???*??
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/22/2011 6:49:00 AM
* “Smile * Why Is Pure Made Beauty * Sooo Extremely Wonderful * Like A Dream That Grips One Heart * And * Cast It Into The Deeepest Sea of Ecstasy * Thank You * My Beautiful Lovely Sweeet & Precious Dawn * Warm Wet Kissses * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
Date: 5/22/2011 12:28:00 AM
hmmm, another surprsie??? yeahhh! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:14:00 PM
I sure can't wait for you to post this one... please let me know when it's in.. yake care,..p.d.
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‡ . . "MMMMM" . . ‡
Date: 5/21/2011 4:47:00 PM
Mysterious indeed, Sarah. You're keeping people in suspense. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 10:04:00 PM
~Dear Sarah.. I never said.. for you to stop writing passion.. but tis.. Come to Jesus.. give Him Your passion.. by Showing Your Love to Jesus.. then you also as you be in Christ.. then in Christ you love me.. Come to Jesus.. for if You Love Jesus.. and Come to Him then I see.. you be in Christ.. through Christ you Love me
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 9:32:00 PM
~~Ps.. All Passion you bestow.. You Show onto Jesus.. as Love You'd Show.. to all- Come to Jesus.. Show Him.. Your Passion and Love through Your writes.. as You Show Love for Him.. then you also through Christ.. show me.. in Christ your Love.. Come to Jesus.. Receive His Undying Love.. For Your Light of Love.. Shall Shine through..
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:27:00 PM
~~~Dear Sarah~Like Jesus says.. If you Love me.. then You.. will come.. Believe in Jesus- then through Jesus God shall Guide Your ways.. I not tell you what to write in your poetry.. God shall guide your path.. if You Love me.. then You Would Love Jesus.. for Jesus is in me.. as I am in Him.. so Shall you be.. Born-again... Come.. Recieve Jesus undying Love.. Give All Your passion to Jesus.. if You Love Jesus then you also in Christ love me..
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 9:18:00 PM
~Just like Jesus says.. If you Love me.. then come.. so Come to Jesus.. Show your Love.. to Him.. for If You love me.. You Would Love Him.. Come Receive His Divine Love.. All you have to do.. is Just Pray.. Trust and Believe.. in Jesus.. Ask Jesus to come into your heart-ask Jesus to Forgive you of Your sins.. Believe Jesus Died and Risen.. God so Loved the world He Gave His Only Begotten Son.. Jesus our Divine Christ.. Come.. to Jesus..
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 8:58:00 PM
Dear Sarah.. for tis If you ??? Love me.. You then.. would Come to Jesus.. because Jesus is in Me.. as I am in Him.. Come be ReNewed.. Reborn.. into Family of Christ.. When You do.. come to Jesus.. then Yes.. I would believe you in Christ you would then behold Love for me.. Only through Christ tis I Believe.. His Undying Love
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/21/2011 6:00:00 PM
* “I Do Apologize Once More * Dear Precious & Beautiful Carolyn. * In Regards Unto This Stumping Moment In Verse * Aside From Wishing to Thank You * For Stopping By This Grain of Sand From A Million Shores Poe Box * I Suppose I Could Brush A Stroke or Two * Yet Wether It Would Mesh Unto The Title I Am Not Quite Certain??? * Yet * Please Forgive Myself * Sorry Everyone * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/21/2011 3:39:00 PM
Sarah This poem is a mystery! Dalila
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 8:49:00 PM
Ps.. God has His Divine Reasons.. For all things to happen the way they do.. You.. my Friend.. Shall see.. Come Believe in Jesus-Ask Him to be Lord of Your Life.. Give your Love of Your heart Soul Body and Mind.. to Him.. all you have to do.. is Just ask.. Jesus.. God Bless Always in Christ
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:46:00 PM
Smile``` Sarah.. God Love You.. He gave His Only Son-Jesus for YOU.. and me.. All.. So we can become Born-again.. Live Eternally with Him.. in His Divine Love.. My Friend.. this is Whom You Love.. tis the Light of Jesus Christ.. that is in me.. Do come.. to Jesus.. Divine Christ.. For His Love is Unconditonal.. and He is Waiting Just for You.. I pray You come.. for then Your Eyes.. shall see.. His Glory.. God Bless
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:43:00 PM
Smile--Ps...for we all have sin-believe that Jesus died on Cross and Risen from the dead.. into heavens.. then You be Born-again. You then shall know Divine Unconditonal Love of Jesus Christ.. Come Pray.. to Jesus-If you ??Love me Come to Christ.. and Eternally Live
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:42:00 PM
~~~Smile.. Dear Sarah.. it is Not I whom you Love.. tis the Light within me.. Jesus Christ.. He is Whom is Calling for You.. to come to Him.. if you ??? Love me.. then You would come.. ask Jesus in your heart.. ask Him for Forgiveness of your sins.. we need to ask..Jesus cont
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 7:25:00 PM
Smile tis for Sarah again.. Ps.. I not run from No one.. but tis write.. I say.. if tis about me.. you have mistaken my Identity.. for tis.. I Not. beauty.. I am.. what I am.. that is what I am.. Please do let Dear John know.. Thank him for showing me his Love.. of Truth.. he need not to worry.. tis be.. I won't visit him either anymore.. for I see.. him and you both have blocked me.. Thank you for Showing such Love.. onto me.. God Bless.. always in Christ.. *Star Light
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Star Light
Date: 5/21/2011 7:21:00 PM
~Smile.. this is for Sarah.. ~Dear Sarah.. as I see.. you are a Blessing.. you do not offend me.. at all.. for tis many state they have Love for me.. but tis only the Light of the Love Jesus that is in me.. but tis be.. you still have me blocked.. so why.. should it matter.. to you.. if I am offended or not.. for I wrote onto you.. but you receive it not.. Thank you..
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/21/2011 3:58:00 PM
* “Smile * Thank You * For Stopping By & Well * Tis Been A Long Night * My Dear Beautiful Dalila. * Yet * Beauty Begets Beauty * Thus One Can Never Offer They * Hopefully * Anything Less. * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah“ *
Date: 5/21/2011 1:46:00 PM
I can see this and i can't wait :)
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/21/2011 1:51:00 PM
* “Smile * Thank You * My Dear Beautiful Dawn * Tis A Joy to Behold Your Lovely Light * Hugs & Kisses * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *
Date: 5/21/2011 1:06:00 PM
thankxx so much Sarah for birthday wishes and warm sentiments luv.. this will be an amazing write as I can feel the vibes luv..
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Sarah Seraphin
Date: 5/21/2011 1:47:00 PM
* “Why Does Your Sweeet Beauty Tempt Me Sooo My Luv * For Your Loveliness Knows What Your Splendours Do So Do * When Your Beauty Whispers Such Softened Words * Deeeply Into My Burning Heart * Ow * My Beautiful Linda Marie * But Even If Unto This Life For Your Love; To Cast It Away * That I May Live * That I May Breathe * Resurrected * Inside of Your Beautiful Eyes * Raptures Evermore * Upon Your Loving Breast * Paradise * As In Everything * My Beautiful Luv * Your Sarah.” *

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