Samia Ali Salama Poet Nonet

The Aliens

They gazed out the window down under.
Then leaned against the hazy glass.
Their arms outstretched in wonder.
As all the humans passed.
Were they waving hi?
Or saying bye?
Then they flew.
Through blue.
Gone.




Samia Ali Arroyo
For nette onclaud's 'Imagination' contest
June 9, 2012

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Black Eyed Susan April 20, 2013 at 12:32 AM oh I like how you did this from their point of view! makes me wonder... :)

Terry O'Leary September 10, 2012 at 7:12 AM A 'nonet' is an interesting form... you have done wonders with it! Terry Samia Ali Salama September 10, 2012 at 7:21 AM Hi Terry, Thank you very much for your comment! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 15, 2012 at 3:47 PM A belated congrats on your win, Samia! I knew this one would do well. Have a great weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Samia Ali Salama June 15, 2012 at 4:05 PM Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I do appreciate your kinds words. You have a great weekend too! :)

Jane Kostman June 14, 2012 at 4:14 PM congrats! good write! Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 4:49 PM Hi Jane, Thank you very much. :)

Sara Kendrick June 14, 2012 at 3:49 PM Cccccongrats on your win..Sara Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 4:49 PM LOL - Thank you very much Sara! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Samia. Love, Carol Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 1:37 PM Hi Carol, Thank you very much! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 14, 2012 at 4:33 AM Congratulations Samia perhaps they were the same aliens as mine ha ha xx Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 5:07 AM Hey Mandy, I think they were! LOL Thank you! :)

Rockman Pritts June 13, 2012 at 11:58 PM Very nice. It takes a tremendous amount of thought, talent and dedication to produce such a poem. You clearly have all three. Well done on the contest. Rockman :-) Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 5:06 AM Hey Rockman, Thank you so much for your kind comment! You know that I appreciate it! :)

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2012 at 9:11 PM SAMIA, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD Samia Ali Salama June 14, 2012 at 5:05 AM Hi PD Thank you very much! Good night! :)

Debbie Guzzi June 12, 2012 at 3:08 PM wee aliens aye!! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love Samia Ali Salama June 12, 2012 at 3:31 PM Yesssss! LOL, You're welcome Debbie, and thank you! :)

Sara Kendrick June 12, 2012 at 2:20 PM Got a chuckle..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your entry into the contest..Good luck..Sara Samia Ali Salama June 12, 2012 at 2:22 PM Hey Sara, Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it! :)

Jack Horne June 12, 2012 at 1:03 PM love this imaginative write, my friend Samia Ali Salama June 12, 2012 at 1:21 PM Hi Jack, Thank you so much! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 9, 2012 at 9:24 PM Excellent interpretation! I love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Samia Ali Salama June 10, 2012 at 4:41 AM Thank you very much Rhonda. I do appreciate your comment! :)

Gail Debole June 9, 2012 at 8:37 PM Like this! - Gail Samia Ali Salama June 10, 2012 at 4:40 AM Thank you so much Gail! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2012 at 8:13 PM I think Nette will really like this. It's very creative. Samia Ali Salama June 10, 2012 at 4:38 AM Hey Andrea, I hope she does. Thank you very much! :)