The Alcoholic

THE ALCOHOLIC
His heart is a bottle,
His desires are too brittle,
his achievements are scuttle,
Because his savings are little
He owes depths he cannot settle,
He beat his wife in a drunk battle,
Now he is single,
Failure is his tittle.
The alcoholic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:54 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Phillips ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - I also have a poem on this theme: "- Alcoholic - The lion roars -" welcome to read it. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Interesting topic that you have chosen upon which to base your work..Sara
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