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The Alcoholic

THE ALCOHOLIC His heart is a bottle, His desires are too brittle, his achievements are scuttle, Because his savings are little He owes depths he cannot settle, He beat his wife in a drunk battle, Now he is single, Failure is his tittle. The alcoholic

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Date: 8/21/2013 3:54:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Phillips ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - I also have a poem on this theme: "- Alcoholic - The lion roars -" welcome to read it. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/3/2013 8:55:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Interesting topic that you have chosen upon which to base your work..Sara
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