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We gleaned glow With blood pulled from earth Oil sifting. From earth depths Battling the awful onslaught We're drenched turn mirthless

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Date: 1/8/2022 5:47:00 AM
Well described, Lasaad--we are draining the earth.
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Date: 1/8/2022 4:26:00 AM
Mother earth is suffering...Delice
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Date: 1/8/2022 1:19:00 AM
I too think this is on ecology. Fine words.
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Date: 1/7/2022 8:53:00 PM
When we exploit nature too much, she will retaliate ! Have I got the correct sense, I wonder ! I must try this poetic form 'Shadorma'
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