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The Ailment

We gleaned glow With blood pulled from earth Oil sifting. From earth depths Battling the awful onslaught We're drenched turn mirthless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Well described, Lasaad--we are draining the earth.
Skelly Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Mother earth is suffering...Delice
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:19 AM
I too think this is on ecology. Fine words.
George Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 8:53 PM
When we exploit nature too much, she will retaliate ! Have I got the correct sense, I wonder ! I must try this poetic form 'Shadorma'
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