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The Aids Song

 AIDS POV: 

Right now it’s only cough and cold
But you won’t survive until you’re old
Your friends and family will stay away
No matter how much you plead or pray

You’ll lose your weight and faint at times
You’ll prefer dying than being alive
No one to take care of you at night
You’ll be untouchable, yeah that’s right

It doesn’t matter how I infected you
All they’ll think all you do is screw
Your life will be like a living hell
You’ll be alone and lonely, can’t you tell?

You’ll regret that day I entered you
The days you have are very few
Within no time you’ll beg to die
But I’ll kill you slowly while you cry


 PATIENT’S POV: 

Right now it’s only cough and cold
But I am gonna get you trolled
My friends and family will stay with me
They love me so much, can’t you see?

Skinnier I’ll be, unhealthy I’ll be
It’s not ‘you’ and ‘I’, with us it’s a ‘we’
They’ll stand by me, take care of me
They’ll take me home, I’ll be free

But today they asked me the reason
Was it some blood transfusion?
Yes it was, I wanted to say
But I realized my life had started to sway

They’re going away, the ones I loved
Was it really necessary for me to be shoved?
I trusted them to stay with me
But now I’m begging you to let me die…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/15/2013 8:21:00 PM
Very touching poem apoorva, and on such a sad subject, well written for AIDS awareness
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:03:00 AM
oh my, what a sad one . I have heard that AIDS patients are living a really long time now, but of course, it's the ones who have health insurance or are getting free aid in countries that have health care for them. A great topic that you addressed, dear.
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Date: 12/31/2012 9:04:00 AM
Forceful, emphatic....well done, Apoorva...jimbo
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Date: 10/14/2012 5:42:00 AM
wonderful wonderful write, a poem that needed to be written, glad i came back to your first posted here on soup.....
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Date: 9/3/2012 7:23:00 AM
So emotional and true words from both sides. There is a song called "I think his name was John" by Reba McEntire and this poem reminded me of it. Amazing write! And thank-you for your kind words on my poetry..:)~Tammy~
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Date: 8/30/2012 4:03:00 PM
Great work about the topic of AIDS..That would be an awful illness to have even though now there is medication that prolongs life if the person get diagnosed and treated early..Thanks for the comments on all my poems..Sara
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/2/2012 9:19:00 AM
ur most welcme.. n thnks...
Date: 8/28/2012 1:26:00 PM
Bravo apoovar, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/29/2012 8:10:00 AM
thanks adeleke
Date: 8/27/2012 12:43:00 AM
Well done!:) Congrats on the win:)
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/29/2012 8:11:00 AM
thanks
Date: 8/6/2012 10:59:00 AM
So sad and haunting in it's truth... Congratulations on the win.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/10/2012 11:05:00 AM
thankyou
Date: 8/2/2012 5:29:00 PM
Very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/4/2012 5:56:00 AM
i'm glad you like it.
Date: 8/2/2012 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/4/2012 5:57:00 AM
thankyou.
Date: 8/1/2012 11:51:00 PM
Apoorva,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/2/2012 12:41:00 AM
thankyou
Date: 7/26/2012 12:21:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Apoorva. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/2/2012 12:41:00 AM
thanks

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