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The Agony of Standing Still

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Boredom as an underestimated stress on the human condition

The ache of routine blowing breaths of fire stemming from agony deep within Better the terror of excitement just for the newness than the sameness of days repeating again and again As travelers through this life we best not gather moss or be entangled in webs for some spiders' bite The agony arises from the realization we may not even taste very good

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Date: 1/16/2021 11:49:00 AM
Very clever work ~ I enjoyed finding this charming poem in the 2020 PS Anthology. Brilliant !
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 7/2/2023 11:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Line- I greatly appreciate the feedback
Date: 5/19/2017 8:46:00 PM
very good excellence
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 5/20/2017 9:52:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 5/16/2017 6:33:00 PM
great
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 5/16/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thanks !
Date: 5/16/2017 9:23:00 AM
Too good though touchy .there's agony inside him.we must move on n not gather moss. Good poem. Kindly review my work I'm new here.
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 5/16/2017 6:02:00 PM
I'm new here as well- thanks

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