The Agony of Love

Never meant to fall in love wasn't meant for me contentment existed in solitude thought I was so free. To dream of non-existent lands imagined without limits years could pass without a care now I dread the minutes All you did was lean your head peered into your eyes sweat appeared upon my brow breathing, turned to sighs. Can't clear you image off my mind wishing, wanting you wrong tremble when you're in my sight lifeless, when you're gone. Lost desire to travel far only search for you love stole my freedom away no longer yearning distant view. Love for you hard to explain away there's vast emptiness when you're near seem to glow floating along in true happiness. Living to keep warm and fed honor and protect you'll see the only thing I'm living for hear you say, 'you love me'.
May 2005, edited Feb 2018

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Date: 2/24/2018 5:23:00 PM
Very romantic, Carl. Congrats on your fine win.
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Carl Jent
Date: 3/2/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thanks, That is my favorite to recite. I appreciate the honor of you reading, Take care.
Date: 2/24/2018 1:53:00 PM
lovely work, Carl, well done! Regards, Viv.
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Carl Jent
Date: 3/2/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Viv, I nice the romance in this poem, thanks for the comment, it means a lot. Thanks
Date: 2/23/2018 10:22:00 AM
so much is said in this poem, loved it...thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 3/2/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate the comment......makes life worthwhile with a smile. Thanks
Date: 5/2/2017 2:31:00 PM
Simply beautiful!
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