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The Aging Tree

Your sharp blade, your crushing strikes, O axe! Cut me not!  
         Allow my life reach its climax, cut me not, cut me not!

 My feeble life’s still in my body’s confines
          My difficult breathing under the canopy of skies
          No sparkle of hope in my heart shines
 I am lonely and sad, in my eyes nothing but despair lies
  
 The wine of moonlight doesn't filter through my branch's sieve
     The fireflies illuminate not my lonely dark nights
     Chicks ‘ave flown; on my bow birds their deserted nests leave 
              No squirrel on my trunk, for its mate fights 
  
No butterfly dances on my arms bare
  No child builds earthen castles on my feet
A wanderer no more gets my shade’s care
         Soon I’ll myself fall and destiny meet
 
 A flash back of my deprived, neglected childhood
             Wasn’t I self-sprouting on a rugged desolate land?
Not behind my upbringing a caring gardener stood 
           Fierce winds and lightning lashed me unrestrained
 
                   Upon me fell the rays of the burning sun enraged
Inflicting wounds, ripping my bark and burning tender skin
       To destroy me was the object that kept each one engaged
  Clinging to the breast of my mother-earth suckling I begin
 
  
Lovingly the mother-earth held me to her bosom tight
                 Monstrous was the cruelty and tyranny unleashed
The cyclone of adversities engaged me continually in fight
          Every dagger pointing at me, every sword unsheathed
 
           
                  Thus, I grew up as a full-blown luscious tree
 The clouds welcomed my adolescence unfurling their hairs
  On my leaves the raindrops engaged in a dancing spree
  Not one from the host of trees my height and beauty bears
 
But, now isn’t the time to talk about the olden days
The claws of time mauled my physique, my dreams and my thought
            Listen to what my every sinking pulse prays
                                Cut me not, O axe! Cut me not, cut me not.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 1/6/2013 3:19:00 PM
I think I just found you and sent you a friend request! going by a picture that looks like the one here.
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Date: 1/6/2013 3:14:00 PM
Mohammad Yamin. That is what I type in at my friend list. Your name is not in my llist. It means you must have friended a wrong person, somebody who has my name but is not me. When I type in your name to find you outside of my page, I can't find you either. There are many Mohammad Yamins' One is a man standing by a woman in a long white outfit. Another is a guy from saudi arabia. Describe how I would know you. HOw is your FB picture? Remember, I am with a cat in my arms. you are not on my list!
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Date: 12/15/2012 1:05:00 AM
Great personification here!! And I love the line where he says, Cut me not. You are sure a ghazal master!! I have done many sonnets as you have done with YOUR favorite form. It is a wonderful thing.
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/16/2012 2:19:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem, Andria. I am glad you liked it. I'll definitely read your sonnets. I admire your writings
Date: 11/27/2012 3:11:00 PM
I think with what we choice to write about we need to be what in America they would call 'all in' either from line 1 we need to let the reader know it's a tree OR we don't tell them it's a tree till the end and then they are surprised! I did another which succeeded better in the second style. Love Beyond the Pale..Light & Love
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/28/2012 5:17:00 PM
Your poem is excellent from all standards American or non-American. The Aging Tree is a story of his life told by a tree that was self-sprouting pleading to be spared of axing in its old age. There is no high flown philosophy in the poem. The two poems are poles apart in theme and approach. Best wishes. -Mohammad Yamin
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/27/2012 3:12:00 PM
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Date: 9/19/2008 4:55:00 PM
Mohammad this is a breath-taking write, I felt as if I was living through the life of the tree, it is such a great shame that so many are being cut down, enjoy this write I did, I always look forward to reading your writes, they come together with life breathed into them, you might enjoy reading my write Blame On Who? thanks for your comments they are very uplifting, take care Deneen
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