The Age of Love

Let’s go to bed my darling girl,
He grabbed her by the hand and they did a quick twirl.

I fancy you right now so come with me,
His love was growing, that she could see.

Come my sweet one, let’s go and make love
I am ready for you now, my sweet turtle dove.

Wait my darling, just wait a little while 
I need time to get ready, you know my style.

You go up and I will follow you
And then you know what we can do.

He ran excited up the stairs, 
It was his birthday in an hour, and he wanted to share.

His lust was growing, his legs were pumping
She followed him, her heart loudly thumping.

Ready for a night of passion, his cheeks a faint colour of rouge
And a mound under the quilt, he thought was really quite huge.

She reached out, to climb over him
And watched as his smile turned to a grin.

Oh no you stop there, thats where I want you
This is what I have planned for us to do.

His eyes rolled backwards, as she thought in his ecstasy 
But his heart had given out, that much she could see.

Never mind he died while he was having such fun
It is a shame, she said - he was only just 91.

Die a "Fun "death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Esquire Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Dear Mandy, Soup Mail Reply LOVE YOU...Harry
Esquire Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Dear Mandy, A little racey but excellent Verses Congratulations on YOUR win in Natalie's Contest Is there any subject YOU can not Write About?? LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege. ..Harry
Horsman Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:08 AM
you faired so well with this creation, i still cannot believe i did not see this before. i must be blind... anyhow, this is wonderful, got me going..!!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Mandy, this make me blush and laugh. Excellent write....congrats on your well deserved win. Hugs CC
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 1:07 AM
Blush, i doubt it. thanks Cecilia x
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Natalie's "Die A Fun Death" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Thanks Carol x
Mccormick Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:30 AM
This was jawdropping good! The eighth couplet made me blush head to toe! Also your last line is priceless! Congrats! ~ECMc
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:52 AM
Tahkyou they are lovely things to say. Much apreciated x
Foster Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 4:48 PM
I have to say I think it was the running up the stairs in verse six that did him in :) good one Mandy ...cheers Margaret
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:04 AM
one never knows Ha ha. Thanks xx
Susan Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 7:01 AM
lol :P fun write - sounds like a great way to go! congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Ta Susan x
Williams Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 1:22 AM
Mandy congrats on your win, what a great way to go, can't wait till i'm 91 ha ha ha ..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 1:31 AM
I hope its many many years away to give you plenty of tie to enjoyself xx
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 10:51 PM
Now that's funny Mandy. I guest there is hope for me yet. Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Thanks Bob, theres hope for us all x
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Mandy-A big congrats. to you for taking #2 in my contest :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Thanks Natalie x
Falotico Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Agreed Tony!!! lol fun write...Michael
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Cheers x
Lane Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 6:41 AM
If we could pick this is how we'd pick. Tony
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 10:47 AM
I don't knoe what to say so thanks.x
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