The Affair

Evening left you signaling the chime
The witness standing back in your eyes,
Pin shut lips
Words without a shot glass

          Pouring freely down vacant streets.

Pages of the past hanging from the eave
Dancing the drunkard's lullaby,
falling from shoe tops.
Fingers twirling busy bees
In the palms of honey cups.

The empty barrel of the pen
Inked, in the letter left
Sleeping next to the wine.

This writing is familiar, you wrote it.
A love letter sealed
with slivers,
Post dated to a place long passed.
Sinewy paper placed neatly in script,

           On the welcome mat to nowhere.

Souls infused through creased air, protest
Each breathe
peeling the pages,
Your blue wraparound dress.

Consenting the satisfaction of knowing, there
Across the hall is your door, uncloaked
leading to your bed,
This is also my bed.
Rendezvous hanging like stale pipe smoke,

           Where clothes splash ripples in absinthe sheets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mason Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Awesome write here, Jason and I like the way you interspersed the alcohol which seems to always be the social lubricant and a necessary part of an "affair" ... smile ... "the witness standing back in your eyes" is a great line!! Congratulations on having your writing featured this week at the Soup!!
Joseph Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 10:57 AM
immensely moving and powerful, congratulations!
Estrada Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 7:56 AM
I very much like the way this poem is organized This style has given me some ideas for my own work nice!
Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 5:04 AM
Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week >> James
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jason. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
Bird Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 9:17 PM
A brilliant Piece Jason, this one is going to my favs definitely and I will make a trip here again to read!
Voorhees Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Jason...I gotta say, in my opinion, you are definitley one of the more talented writers this site has to offer. No disrespect to any of the others...I just like the style in which you write. Imaginative without being fantastical...Descriptive without babbling on and on...and Impassioned without being cliche and sappy. All good things! Right on, Write on! Steve
Richards Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 11:08 AM
I agree with Keith's comment. .... Bravo!! You are GOOD! ~ Carrie
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December 12, 2008 at 2:20 PM
Pure poetry my friend... excellent language and compelling imagery... phrasing right out of T.S. Eliot. Great title... outstanding piece! BRAVO Jason!! Best wishes, Keith
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