The Affair

Evening left you signaling the chime
The witness standing back in your eyes,
Pin shut lips
Words without a shot glass

          Pouring freely down vacant streets.

Pages of the past hanging from the eave
Dancing the drunkard's lullaby,
falling from shoe tops.
Fingers twirling busy bees
In the palms of honey cups.

The empty barrel of the pen
Inked, in the letter left
Sleeping next to the wine.

This writing is familiar, you wrote it.
A love letter sealed
with slivers,
Post dated to a place long passed.
Sinewy paper placed neatly in script,

           On the welcome mat to nowhere.

Souls infused through creased air, protest
Each breathe
peeling the pages,
Your blue wraparound dress.

Consenting the satisfaction of knowing, there
Across the hall is your door, uncloaked
leading to your bed,
This is also my bed.
Rendezvous hanging like stale pipe smoke,

           Where clothes splash ripples in absinthe sheets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/26/2009 1:48:00 PM
Awesome write here, Jason and I like the way you interspersed the alcohol which seems to always be the social lubricant and a necessary part of an "affair" ... smile ... "the witness standing back in your eyes" is a great line!! Congratulations on having your writing featured this week at the Soup!!
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Date: 10/26/2009 10:57:00 AM
immensely moving and powerful, congratulations!
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:56:00 AM
I very much like the way this poem is organized This style has given me some ideas for my own work nice!
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:04:00 AM
Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week >> James
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jason. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2009 9:17:00 PM
A brilliant Piece Jason, this one is going to my favs definitely and I will make a trip here again to read!
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Date: 3/3/2009 11:42:00 AM
Jason...I gotta say, in my opinion, you are definitley one of the more talented writers this site has to offer. No disrespect to any of the others...I just like the style in which you write. Imaginative without being fantastical...Descriptive without babbling on and on...and Impassioned without being cliche and sappy. All good things! Right on, Write on! Steve
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:08:00 AM
I agree with Keith's comment. .... Bravo!! You are GOOD! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/12/2008 2:20:00 PM
Pure poetry my friend... excellent language and compelling imagery... phrasing right out of T.S. Eliot. Great title... outstanding piece! BRAVO Jason!! Best wishes, Keith
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