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THE ADVENTURES OF JIM THE TRIM- AT THE METRO

Jim the Trim’s been watching too much video The kind that caused rise in his libido Mind still on a femme fatale Was brought to the hospital His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 10 April 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/15/2015 8:55:00 PM
I waiting for the next issue of Jim the Trim!!!!!
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Date: 4/15/2015 3:50:00 PM
That is too funny Kim! One of those oops moments! Very creative!
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Date: 4/12/2015 11:08:00 AM
:)))) ..... Embarrassing :))) ........... maybe better .... happy as small (?) - Well done, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:40:00 PM
..... medium ?? :))))))
Date: 4/11/2015 11:20:00 PM
hahaha. That is hilarious. Too much Viagra i'd say also. You are a gas!!
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:44:00 AM
Oh! This sure was a deflating experience! I am sure he's been discharged by now, ready for the next episode:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:16:00 AM
i'm waiting for the complete series of jim.. this is hilarious, kim.. kaloka!... greeat job!.. huggs
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Date: 4/11/2015 1:38:00 AM
His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro., that! LOL
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Date: 4/11/2015 1:24:00 AM
LOL Happens to me all the time!
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Date: 4/10/2015 10:41:00 PM
UT oh too much of a good thing! Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:54:00 PM
Oh My...poor guy...that caused some damage this time Kim...hmmm maybe I read the out of order??? J/K ~jan
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Date: 4/10/2015 6:46:00 PM
It hurts just to read it. lol
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:52:00 PM
OUCH! lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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