Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

The Adventures of Jim the Trim- At the Metro

Jim the Trim’s been watching too much video
The kind that caused rise in his libido
Mind still on a femme fatale
Was brought to the hospital
His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro.






KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
10 April 2015

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Arthur Vaso April 15, 2015 at 8:55 PM I waiting for the next issue of Jim the Trim!!!!!

Maurice Yvonne April 15, 2015 at 3:50 PM That is too funny Kim! One of those oops moments! Very creative!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2015 at 11:08 AM :)))) ..... Embarrassing :))) ........... maybe better .... happy as small (?) - Well done, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)))) Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2015 at 12:40 PM ..... medium ?? :))))))

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2015 at 11:20 PM hahaha. That is hilarious. Too much Viagra i'd say also. You are a gas!!

Paul Callus April 11, 2015 at 3:44 AM Oh! This sure was a deflating experience! I am sure he's been discharged by now, ready for the next episode:) hugs // paul

Nette Onclaud April 11, 2015 at 3:16 AM i'm waiting for the complete series of jim.. this is hilarious, kim.. kaloka!... greeat job!.. huggs

Arthur Vaso April 11, 2015 at 1:38 AM His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro., that! LOL

Arthur Vaso April 11, 2015 at 1:24 AM LOL Happens to me all the time!

Debbie Guzzi April 10, 2015 at 10:41 PM UT oh too much of a good thing! Light & Love

Jaycee Cervenka April 10, 2015 at 8:54 PM Oh My...poor guy...that caused some damage this time Kim...hmmm maybe I read the out of order??? J/K ~jan

Jerry T Curtis April 10, 2015 at 6:46 PM It hurts just to read it. lol

Jan Allison April 10, 2015 at 3:52 PM OUCH! lol:-) Hugs jan xx