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02/26/2026

For the Voir Dire on Love  contest by Suzette Richards

The Ache of Love

New love--my heart is blazing
The very touch of my skin is electric	
I own all the worlds
I fly thru the starry skies

The stars slip through my fingers
as I clasp them to my heart
then dance with the clouds
it's magic to be in love

but does magic last
or is it only the fading memory
of our kiss
that lingers in the night air 

now doubt has crept in
and shadows my joy
do you feel this love
or am I but a moment in time's journey

To feel like an undefinably rare gem
and then crash
with a sad realization
you may be like the others

to spin a daydream with but a single kiss
how grasping is that
I must remember daydreams and  magic lands
are childish wishes we had to leave behind
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 7:24 AM
Yeah premarital loves maybe very electric but shortlived and fickle. Kudos to this awesomely expressed poem wow! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^>>> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 5:05 PM
Creative work penned. Way to go. Yes, don't rush into anything because a love for a lifetime is a serious commitment. Sara K
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Guess when it hit me what I was doing, in the middle of my wedding vows, but our love lasted for a lifetime where some go sour on the honeymoon. Sara K.
Peck Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 7:07 PM
Now you tell me! (:
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