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" THE ABYSS" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 05 DECEMBER 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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The Abyss

Uncontrolled lusts hurl the soul into the abyss of perpetual darkness! 







©  Demetrios Trifiatis
    05 December 2017

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Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2017

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Ravi Sathasivam

December 10, 2017 at 12:40 AM

Excellent. Very true and beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing it

Richard Lamoureux

December 7, 2017 at 5:11 PM

Welcome back for the day. I too wrote a piece on lust. It seems there are many who love the darkness.

December 7, 2017 at 7:23 AM

Dear friend Demetrios, lust leaves no room for love and light to lift the soul. Your Monoku is deeply contemplative and beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan

December 7, 2017 at 6:02 AM

Lust can destroys one's sincerity.... Great one liner..

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 5, 2017 at 11:16 AM

- ... and they deserve eternal darkness ! - Great written, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 5, 2017 at 10:18 AM

How true! Great thought... Lovely flowers...

Eileen Manassian

December 5, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Very true, my dear philosopher. You always bring truth to light. Blessings.

December 5, 2017 at 7:28 AM

Well said, Demetrios, hugs dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 5, 2017 at 7:58 AM

Dearest, Eve , thank you very much for your kind visit and comment!

December 5, 2017 at 7:22 AM

True my dearest Demetrios, except when love is involved which lights up the darkness ...Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 5, 2017 at 7:57 AM

My dearest friend, Maria, when lust is involved there is no room left for love, for lust is a selfish beast! Thank you for visiting!

December 5, 2017 at 6:47 AM

Well said, my friend, Demetrios--an insightful message to ponder today!

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 5, 2017 at 7:59 AM

How wonderful to see you dear, Vijay! Thank you for your gracious comment!

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