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" THE ABYSS" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 05 DECEMBER 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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Uncontrolled lusts hurl the soul into the abyss of perpetual darkness! © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 December 2017 *Back for today

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2017 12:40:00 AM

Excellent. Very true and beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing it

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/7/2017 5:11:00 PM

Welcome back for the day. I too wrote a piece on lust. It seems there are many who love the darkness.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/7/2017 7:23:00 AM

Dear friend Demetrios, lust leaves no room for love and light to lift the soul. Your Monoku is deeply contemplative and beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2017 6:02:00 AM

Lust can destroys one's sincerity.... Great one liner..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2017 11:16:00 AM

- ... and they deserve eternal darkness ! - Great written, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/5/2017 10:18:00 AM

How true! Great thought... Lovely flowers...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/5/2017 9:06:00 AM

Very true, my dear philosopher. You always bring truth to light. Blessings.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2017 7:28:00 AM

Well said, Demetrios, hugs dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:58:00 AM

Dearest, Eve , thank you very much for your kind visit and comment!

Maria Williams

Date: 12/5/2017 7:22:00 AM

True my dearest Demetrios, except when love is involved which lights up the darkness ...Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:57:00 AM

My dearest friend, Maria, when lust is involved there is no room left for love, for lust is a selfish beast! Thank you for visiting!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/5/2017 6:47:00 AM

Well said, my friend, Demetrios--an insightful message to ponder today!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:59:00 AM

How wonderful to see you dear, Vijay! Thank you for your gracious comment!