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" THE ABYSS" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 05 DECEMBER 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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The Abyss

Uncontrolled lusts hurl the soul into the abyss of perpetual darkness! 







©  Demetrios Trifiatis
    05 December 2017

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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/10/2017 12:40:00 AM
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Excellent. Very true and beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing it
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2017 5:11:00 PM
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Welcome back for the day. I too wrote a piece on lust. It seems there are many who love the darkness.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/7/2017 7:23:00 AM
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Dear friend Demetrios, lust leaves no room for love and light to lift the soul. Your Monoku is deeply contemplative and beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan
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Silent One
Date: 12/7/2017 6:02:00 AM
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Lust can destroys one's sincerity.... Great one liner..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2017 11:16:00 AM
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- ... and they deserve eternal darkness ! - Great written, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 12/5/2017 10:18:00 AM
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How true! Great thought... Lovely flowers...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2017 9:06:00 AM
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Very true, my dear philosopher. You always bring truth to light. Blessings.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2017 7:28:00 AM
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Well said, Demetrios, hugs dear friend
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:58:00 AM
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Dearest, Eve , thank you very much for your kind visit and comment!
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Maria Williams
Date: 12/5/2017 7:22:00 AM
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True my dearest Demetrios, except when love is involved which lights up the darkness ...Maria xxx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:57:00 AM
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My dearest friend, Maria, when lust is involved there is no room left for love, for lust is a selfish beast! Thank you for visiting!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/5/2017 6:47:00 AM
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Well said, my friend, Demetrios--an insightful message to ponder today!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2017 7:59:00 AM
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How wonderful to see you dear, Vijay! Thank you for your gracious comment!
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