The Vows

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"THE VOWS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 29 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

Sacred vows they made

Forever their love to last,

Eternally One!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
         29 July 2017

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Probir Gupta

Date: 7/30/2017 9:44:00 AM

A joy to read indeed ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/30/2017 5:50:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, Probir! Indeed!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2017 2:37:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, What a beautiful testament of love in a few words. Well done:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/29/2017 2:49:00 PM

Does love need many words to be declared, my dear, Alexis? So good to see you again my friend! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/29/2017 8:13:00 AM

- GORGEOUS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/29/2017 2:09:00 PM

THANK YOU, my friend, Anne-Lise for liking my little poem! Hugs!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/29/2017 7:57:00 AM

Unfortunately many young people dont take their vows seriously at all these days. My father used to say, "in our day when something was broken we fixed it, we did not throw it away". Sacred vows should be taken seriously. Loved your Haiku, brilliant as always dearest Demetrios...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/29/2017 2:12:00 PM

Your father dearest, Maria was right and is right! Today's mentality is when something it doesn't work throw it away and buy a new one. Unfortunately this mentality expanded to relationships and marriages! Thank you for your wonderful and didactic comment my dear friend! Keep mr. R, please! Haha!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2017 4:04:00 AM

Wow, such a powerful message you have written here Demetrios! I love it! You have employed upon me a grand feeling of what love's dedication truly means, what my Vows were to me! I truly loved reading this grandiose piece this morning! Such an awesome poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/29/2017 5:19:00 AM

How wonderful to receive your visit yet for another day dear Russell and read your gracious comments, pieces of poetic ardor! Thank you my friend!