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The Bitter Fruits of Love

Like a seed sown into the bosom of the earth, I took you into my heart and let you take roots. I showered you with my love and nurtured you with my dreams hoping someday a sturdy tree to flourish bearing sweet fruits of love and casting around me a cool and soothing shade in my trying days of high noon. But like a fledgling, having learned to fly, You abandoned the love nest disappearing from my life like a track of foot-prints on the ever-shifting sands of the desert! "Falling in Love" contest by Aiyah de Torres

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/25/2015 3:31:00 PM
Abdul, Congrats.. SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 6:13:00 PM
Abdul, a big CONGRATULATIONS to you!!!! You made my heart cry for this very beautiful poem... It made my heart beats again!! Thank you so much!!! :O)
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Date: 10/21/2015 4:31:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:46:00 PM
Very soft and tender...The sad twist in the end tears at the heart. Good luck in the contest.
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