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The Journey

THE JOURNEY What a joy it could be to sit in a far going train with you, - to look into the window for some time keeping silent and in the glass darkling - to discern your soul passing among the moving crowds and fields and hills and clouds, not part of the firmament - just seeming, since the true you sits facing me too in this small compartment, - to hear your silent voice hearing my own heart’s joys. It is the journey endless, the pilgrimage which binds us, for there is no last hour. The train far going is our unspoken commitment bound to a future not yet found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2015 11:49:00 PM
NICE WIN....SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:49:00 AM
Lovely, lovely poem. Beautifully written, Sidney.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:18:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sidney! Great work!
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:27:00 PM
OMG, this is magnificent. HOw I wish you would visit me. It is so rarely that I see you here and then I happen upon one of your poems like at one of these winner lists and it leaves me breathless. A FAVE
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:56:00 AM
peaceful and easy...Love it....Jack
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 5:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sydney. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck..with luv..
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