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The Dreamer

Looking out the window, glancing at the sunset My eyes look beyond the stars to and fro Thinking of the vision of how my future will go Do I see you , or are you just a dream to me come true My eyes yet hazel one that turns blue like Marilyn MASON Crying so deeply wanting you . Boo, Whoo, my heart says yet lonely ok I begin to get on my knees to pray hoping today is that day Are you crazy they say ? No way , No way I am a dreamer ok and illusionists , a tranquil flower A women of great wisdom With mystical powers that will go higher and higher A creature with great desire, A red rose, so deep yet so discreet Hoping to day you will remember me a dreamer , your Nubian freak me you see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 7:09:00 PM
Sofea, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/18/2014 11:50:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, powerful, romantic write that I truly enjoyed. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/15/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sofea - I choose your first lovely written poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2014 7:55:00 AM
You have incorporated so much of yourself into your poem, looking forward to reading more from this illusionist, this tranquil flower that you are. :)
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Date: 8/14/2014 8:25:00 PM
Sofea, WOW.. epicly deep...,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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