The Balloons

THE BALLOONS


Holding hands together  we went out
Into the school yard with the kids one day 
And we held a lot of colored balloons ready to fly
Posed for photos  for parents  then  ready to launch
They were excited and frolicking as we counted down 
Five four three two one   and let them go
Up they went,  fast  and in different directions,  but all 
Loosely held together as if by invisible threads
And growing bigger as they ascended
Different colors and sizes,  different speeds of ascent
One or two went way ahead,  one or two  somewhat behind
They reached as high as possible in one direction then 
The breeze took them and they became scattered,
Glowing in the sun and freedom
Till we lost sight of them;   but I am sure 
They went on to become even bigger and faster.
Then we went back into the classroom, loosely held together 
As if by invisible threads.

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NOTE

This is a true episode from  about six months ago in my school.
A schoolteacher does have invisible ties to his pupils,   
often long after they have flown, and reached their own heights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/4/2011 10:20:00 PM
wow, Sydney, this is quite a poem!! I really like the symbolism of the students to the balloons. Amazing. A fave!
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Date: 11/4/2011 4:39:00 AM
Well done and meaningful. Thank you. I have a poem coming in a week or so by the same title but a very different meaning. Tony
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