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Phone in the pocket quietly sits, Aching still where a vibrating “good morning” used to be; Half an hour of “I love yous”, Filled now with silence and Willing, wanting and waiting. An arm lain casually across a pocket, Not feeling for the vibration, Simply resting there. A lie. Pulling into the station now, Phone unmoved, unmoving, The journey has reached its end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/30/2016 9:05:00 PM
My welcome too, Jane! if you have any questions, I'm happy to help! This poem is very original in creativity...you surely grip the reader...great anticipation & sense of loss! jimbo
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Date: 7/25/2016 11:27:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Jane. Loved your write and look forward to reading more. Blessings Carl
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:37:00 PM
loved the poem, nice work.
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