The 6:23

Phone in the pocket quietly sits,
Aching still where a vibrating
“good morning” used to be;

Half an hour of “I love yous”,
Filled now with silence and 
Willing, wanting and waiting.

An arm lain casually across a pocket,
Not feeling for the vibration,
Simply resting there. A lie.

Pulling into the station now,
Phone unmoved, unmoving,
The journey has reached its end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Goff Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 9:05 PM
My welcome too, Jane! if you have any questions, I'm happy to help! This poem is very original in creativity...you surely grip the reader...great anticipation & sense of loss! jimbo
Fraser Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Welcome to the soup Jane. Loved your write and look forward to reading more. Blessings Carl
Kent Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:37 PM
loved the poem, nice work.
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