Apoorva Patrikar Poet Free verse

The 5 Poetrysoup W's

Who is on PoetrySoup? Yo composers, I am here
What do I do on PoetrySoup? participate in contests, without any fear
When do I surf this site? All the time, i always cheer
Where do I stand in life? After joining PoetrySoup, now it's clear
Why do I compose songs? Not to win, but because to me, its very dear...

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Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 10:49 AM Apoorva, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 8:24 AM Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Apoorva. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane August 29, 2012 at 8:30 PM I love how your asked and answered the questions....awesome write! Congrats on your win. Hugs Apoorva Patrikar August 30, 2012 at 7:26 AM thankyou :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 29, 2012 at 4:30 PM Love, love, love this one, Apoorva! I think most of us can relate... a belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Apoorva Patrikar August 30, 2012 at 7:26 AM thankyou :)

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2012 at 8:37 PM gosh, I think if I had been judged, I may have put this one at the top of the list. It was so cute the way you related it to Soup. Congrats on your win! Apoorva Patrikar August 29, 2012 at 8:09 AM this is the kindest, bestest and awesommest comment anyone has ever given me!! thanks Andrea!!!

Lee Ramage August 27, 2012 at 3:21 PM We are glad you are here. Nice poem, it is a nice family isn;t it, PS. Take care and congratulations on your win. Lee Apoorva Patrikar August 29, 2012 at 8:09 AM yeah it is, thanks

Kim Merryman August 27, 2012 at 9:00 AM Nice write, Apoorva. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Apoorva Patrikar August 29, 2012 at 8:11 AM thanks kim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 27, 2012 at 7:11 AM Congratulations on a fine win apoorva xx Apoorva Patrikar August 29, 2012 at 8:12 AM thanks

Harry Horsman August 27, 2012 at 5:49 AM congrats apoorva, love your positive poem, thank you for entering my first contest, and welcome to the winners circle. Apoorva Patrikar August 29, 2012 at 8:12 AM thanks

Kash Poet August 26, 2012 at 3:19 PM apoorva!!(wonderful!!)..thanks for reading my poem:)

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2012 at 1:48 PM I LOVE this, it's such a great positive way to discuss poetrysoup. I bet it will do well in the contest! Apoorva Patrikar August 26, 2012 at 11:49 AM thanks andrea

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2012 at 9:41 PM Apoorva, very deep...filled with passion,,,xox~pd Apoorva Patrikar August 26, 2012 at 11:49 AM :)