Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Poet Questionku

The 21 Guns Questionku

This heart is broke
Nothing more to give
Lord, should I let it be

Losing my pride
Nearly lost my faith
Lord, why should it just be

21 guns
And their bells tolling
Lord, help me let it be

The queen was dead
Longer lived the rose
Lord, what's in store for me

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Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 1:33 PM Loved the last stanza, especially. Enjoyed this one, too. Kudos! :)

Richard Lamoureux October 7, 2013 at 8:33 AM Outstanding! Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 7, 2013 at 12:39 PM Hi; Rick! Just thought of you and your success story , especially with "Dancing coins", together with Eileen! We shouldhave a big Poetry Soup Web Writers Party to celebrate all this! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 10:24 PM these are very good. Profound ones. Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 4, 2013 at 3:32 PM Thank you for taking time reading my questionkus; your comments are very important to me! Blessings!

Gerald Kithinji October 1, 2013 at 3:47 PM Reminds me of Madagascar- the movie!

Gerald Kithinji October 1, 2013 at 3:44 PM Poet with the shortest name, thank you for sharing your poetic thoughts. Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 1, 2013 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Gerald (^_^), you can call me Hanitra!