That's When I Fall Down Upon My Knees

THAT’S WHEN I FALL DOWN UPON MY KNEES

There’s no way- 
I’ll see another sunrise
My hope is gone-
as I contemplate my life

Prospects are bleak- 
that’s just the way I’m feeling
My strength is gone- 
and my will to live is fading

Here in the dark- 
Even my shadow has left me
I spiral down-
into a pit of misery

That’s when I- 
remember that you love me
I kneel to pray- 
and throw all my cares on you

Chorus
That’s when I fall down upon my knees
And then I beg you Lord...
Don’t turn your face away from me
I know I’ve made a mess out of my life
Could you help me please?
When I feel like it’s the end
That’s when I fall down upon my knees

I can’t lie- 
I know I’m running out of time
And I know-
that your patience is wearing thin

I must change-
if I’m ever going to save my life
Oh please dear Lord-
help me fight all my sins and win!

Chorus
That’s when I fall down upon my knees
And then I beg you Lord...
Don’t turn your face away from me
I know I’ve made a mess out of my life
Could you help me please?
When I feel like it’s the end
That’s when I fall down upon my knees

Chorus repeat 

Finale
That’s when I fall down upon my knees
That’s when I fall down upon my knees

repeat and fade

John Derek Hamilton June 14,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Daniel Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 8:43 AM
A brilliant and hope-filled song, John:) a great position to be in:)
Hamilton Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Jo I thought you would like this one, I appreciate your kind words and visit!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 6:28 AM
That is one well written song John! :) xomo
Hamilton Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Mo, it is so nice to have you grace my page!
Gentry Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 8:11 PM
A great song asking for help and forgiveness. A fave.
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate the positive feedback and especially the fave, coming from you I am especially honored!
One Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:17 PM
WE all fall down on our knees... it is the perfect position to pray... Great lyrics my friend..
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thanks SO, I thought this one might get some positive feedback, thanks for your confirmation!
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Excellent John! Very well done :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Thanks Heidi, you are always the first to comment, I do appreciate your support!
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