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That's Life 21

Aged twenty one
got the key to the door ...
shocked to discover
parents had changed the locks!!


checked with how many syllables

3/17/19


n/a in contest I thought it would appeal to the sponsor's sense of humour but still got an n/a

21 syllables Poetry Contest

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Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/25/2019 9:55:00 PM G'day Jan … message loud and clear (off) - thanks Jan - Lindsay Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/19/2019 1:20:00 AM hahahahaha love it Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/19/2019 3:59:00 AM bet the lad didn't lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour Date: 3/18/2019 3:48:00 AM My first belly laugh of the day - wonderful Jan. Kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/18/2019 3:58:00 AM Thanks Ann I guess the parents are telling him its time to move on!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/17/2019 7:54:00 PM Oh, Jan, Jan, Jan, Jan, Jan, I am holding my sides now. I am too old to laugh this hard! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/17/2019 8:05:00 PM Thanks Caren I was worried people didn't get the dry humour here thanks for being the first to comment!:-) hugs Jan xx