Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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That's Life 21

Aged twenty one
got the key to the door ...
shocked to discover
parents had changed the locks!!


checked with how many syllables

3/17/19


n/a in contest I thought it would appeal to the sponsor's sense of humour but still got an n/a

21 syllables Poetry Contest

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Lindsay Laurie March 25, 2019 at 9:55 PM G'day Jan … message loud and clear (off) - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Arthur Vaso March 19, 2019 at 1:20 AM hahahahaha love it Jan Allison March 19, 2019 at 3:59 AM bet the lad didn't lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour March 18, 2019 at 3:48 AM My first belly laugh of the day - wonderful Jan. Kindest thoughts Ann xx Jan Allison March 18, 2019 at 3:58 AM Thanks Ann I guess the parents are telling him its time to move on!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger March 17, 2019 at 7:54 PM Oh, Jan, Jan, Jan, Jan, Jan, I am holding my sides now. I am too old to laugh this hard! Jan Allison March 17, 2019 at 8:05 PM Thanks Caren I was worried people didn't get the dry humour here thanks for being the first to comment!:-) hugs Jan xx