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Looking outside, I see plenty of snow; for everything has been dusted in white, while time itself runs perceptibly slow. Yet icicles sparkling in the sunlight, can morph into a splendiferous sight. My breath frosts, for the air is crisp and cold, while the trees get glazed in layers of ice; creating a wonderland to behold. Winter levies an exorbitant price: while enticing, it's anything but nice. Autumn colors have faded, and all's bland, for there are no more sweet songbirds to sing: they've all migrated to a warmer land. And my heart pines for the first days of Spring; while a cold Winter continues to cling. I miss the trees with canopies of green, along with the fragrant flowers in bloom, and babbling brooks, picturesque and serene. I prefer Spring's warmth over Winter's gloom: but that's just me; I don't mean to presume.

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Date: 5/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Emile. Lovely.
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Date: 5/6/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2018 11:56:00 AM
Emile...I think it is safe to presume. Michigan is wicked and unpredictable this time of year. I yearn spring. Beautiful and vivid imagery, this poem rocks. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Rhoda, I live in Toronto Canada and it is always unpredictable this time of year, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2018 9:40:00 AM
You described beauty in the snow... tickled the senses...and departed like a breeze...Enjoyed it...
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Arturo, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2018 9:22:00 AM
Very nice Emile. I enjoyed this and can relate to it as well. It is snowing here today and I am looking forward to Spring and Summer :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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