That Was Just a Dream

We went together
To a place                 
Where roses never
Wither

A place where flower
Birds and nectar
Sucking bees
Sing a meliflious
Song of love

We sat there
Under cool shades
Of sinously
Swaying trees

We stayed so close
That we could
Feel the moving
Of each others lungs

And our hearts 
Did beat to the same
Rhythm of love
But that 
Was just a dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kofi Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 9:31 AM
you never ceases to enlighten me each time i am in this community. ur thoughts are just marvelous, African creativity at its peak, is it pearching on Kilimanjaro or resting deep in the caves in cape? tell me more
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:51 PM
ahhh, this could even be in one of the contests. It could be in the tree cntest or surreal contest especially. VERY nice!
Mannan Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Oh this is really enchanting. Well done. Thanks for the comments.
Reid-Hansen Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 1:46 AM
And its just my imagination....once again...running away with me...heeee! Yes! I like this one=0)
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