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That was just a dream

We went together To a place Where roses never Wither A place where flower Birds and nectar Sucking bees Sing a meliflious Song of love We sat there Under cool shades Of sinously Swaying trees We stayed so close That we could Feel the moving Of each others lungs And our hearts Did beat to the same Rhythm of love But that Was just a dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/4/2011 9:31:00 AM
you never ceases to enlighten me each time i am in this community. ur thoughts are just marvelous, African creativity at its peak, is it pearching on Kilimanjaro or resting deep in the caves in cape? tell me more
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:51:00 PM
ahhh, this could even be in one of the contests. It could be in the tree cntest or surreal contest especially. VERY nice!
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:54:00 AM
Oh this is really enchanting. Well done. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 4/9/2011 1:46:00 AM
And its just my imagination....once again...running away with me...heeee! Yes! I like this one=0)
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